zmp ~ dying to fly

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zmp ~ dying to fly

Autumn comes
warning of winter
tree's leaves
begin to wither

The annual cling
releasing when dry
leaves falling
dying to fly

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dcpoet44dcpoet44over 18 years ago
i wonder if this...

little bit could look like this for a different effect. purely your choice.....

The annual cling

releasing when dry

leaves falling

dying to fly

its release -

the annual cling,

leaves fall

dying to fly.

*****

it's just another way to look at it. it would make a strong piece that much stronger.....don

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
rhyme and rhythm...

at the zmp best...timing is perfect in this jewel...blue

Scott N. LeavittScott N. Leavittover 18 years ago
**5**

HOORAY!! An other ZMP!! I love it it is SO TRUE!! And it rhymes!! A GOOD one, ZMA!! MORE PLEASE!!

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Another treat added to the ZMP smorgasbord; just enough to whet the appetite and in doing, craving more. Well done.

sweet GA peachessweet GA peachesover 18 years ago
Where ...

is the mind,

when the pen

is drawn to write

such {prettywords}

into my head.

-sGp-