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- ZMP ~ little thoughts
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Spiritual Growth
the catapillar
that never changes
into a butterfly
knows not
that it would have had
wings to rise
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Naked tree
I saw a naked tree today
on the ground
all of its bark laid
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Raising thoughts
If you lift your toes when you walk
should we raise our mind while thinking
what happens when the brains not raised
the toe gets stumbed and throbbing
- COMMENTS
LuciousBi-Writes4Uover 18 years agoloved the last one in particular! but they are all great as usual!
another great job Arty!
Kisses,
T
Scott N. Leavittover 18 years agoI rememberd it!! Here is an other little ZEN -
Prepare the child for the path, not the path for the child.
Scott N. Leavittover 18 years agoI think its a GOOD ZMP!!! I like it alot like all of ZMAS poems!! I had one to say about a boy & a path but I dont remember it now!!
Anonymousover 18 years agoThe first one isn't bad but that whole butterfly and caterpillar idea is all over the internet. And it's caterpillar. The last one is hard to constructively comment on. I'm not familiar with "stumbed." Is it suppose to be stumbled or stumped? And the following lines do not work very well: "brains not raised the toe gets stumbed and throbbing" Sorry, but it sounds grammatically wrong and uneducated. Not saying that you are. I'm saying part of this poem comes across as an uneducated piece of writing. With knowledge comes wings.
bluerainsover 18 years agoas QP says so well...this is one of your best...thanks for caring and sharing your heart will others..I still have to read your vixen pen ...tis a long one..I have to be in a certain frame to read those nasty biggies...winks...blue
