zmp ~ sun circles

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zmp ~ sun circles


one hundred Cranes
circled the sun
for nothing better to do

they banned together
in this flight
a hundred white birds on blue

they made a circle
around the sun
as this circling grew

a hundred Cranes
flying around
like sun circles

...were nothing new!

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
reminds me of the day

we went out to the spoil island ..and the bait fish were running hard ...

birds circling everywhere ...the sounds of flapping wings was what I remember most...blue

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Okay Art, but don't it make ya dizzy,

lookin' up at them thar birds

goin' roun & round & roun ...