- Non-Erotic Poetry
- ZMP ~ tree whiskers
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From limbs they hang
swaying in a breeze
long gray strands
growing from the trees
like an old man's beard
they're long and soft
these trees full of
old spanish moss
They're an aid to shading
the bright sun's blister
hanging moss that looks
like a tree's whiskers
- COMMENTS
WickedEveover 18 years agowhere have all the old beards gone?
they hang from limbs,
long and gray,
shading the belly of a tree.
and somewhere, mossy men
tug curiously
at their spanish whiskers.
Scott N. Leavittover 18 years agoI LIKE ZMPS!!! This is good & Im glad your tree is just old & not dead to!!!
Jennifer Cover 18 years agoYou know I love your work
my friend, but then apparently
i'm a gusher!...lol
but i really like the feel of this
and it flows beautifully.
Thanks for the ZMP,
~ Jenn
Du Lacover 18 years agoI love the visuals and the simplicity of the work. Something missing though in the last line. I would rework it. It lacks the power of the rest of the poem. Otherwise a wonderful ZMP again my friend
du~
LeBrozover 18 years agoLooking the real
with eyes youthful fresh
but I still like my thought from the thread
