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  • All the other characters are overtly sad, but Lucas is the one who makes my heart bleed. People have said that he's immature, but he's 18! That really is not an adult and in contemporary society it's more like 30 is what age you become an adult. I just wish he could find himself. He has mostly had his identity handed to hi, yeah it's cultural pride and that's good, but I'd so love for him to develop dreams and aspirations. Some readers have said that he doesn't support Claudia's dreams, but it's pretty clear he does. It's just he doesn't have his own and that's sad. Maybe it would take a few years for him to know what he wants, like so many people who actually do go to college and then change paths.
    Worried for him... And actually worried a bit about Tristan using his powers for his own gain.

    on Lost Girl Ch. 14 (3)
  • First off, great story. I really really liked it. The set up, characterization, and build was amoung the better stories I have ever read. And the sexual action was very hot. All quite enthralling. I loved that mostly it was believable too from start to finish. An incestuous coupling set about by the frustration of the two through their separate bouts of abstinence just seems like something that could actually happen. In fact, I believe you could have nurtured that point even more. For me, the absolute best part of the story was her frustration through several near, but not quite there orgasms. That kind of intense sexual frustration can lead people to do very naughty things that they wouldn't even consider normally. Again, giving credence to believability. And therein lies the nitpick. While the story build was amazing, the climax to me felt a bit off. My constructive critism would be that she should have in some way continued to endure without release up until the very end climax of the story wherein they finally have sex. While I liked the mutual masterbation, I feel that scene somewhat deflated the story a bit. All that being said, again, however you slice it, it was a very well written story. Please keep writing.

    on My Brother's Dreams Ch. 01 (38)
  • Pathetic

    on Sue Wants a Baby Pt. 01 (1)
  • Story was a bit rushed. From loving wife to slut on the hunt? Maybe all wasn't well in the marriage to begin with? It wasn't like Brenda. No parties, schmoozing etc. A little back story first in the sequel please. Such as how did he end up with a trust fund that will pay for everything. Then his meeting Alli and getting married. Of course using the clone phone to bust Marconi. And the coup de grace, Brenda having her way with Billy boy. No nonsense response was very good. Looking forward to the sequel. Thanks for posting.

    on A Shocking Betrayal (6)
  • Tits and a tighter pussy?

    Seriously, what the fuck is wrong with you? It's one thing to be in a relationship where you agree to certain events, it's another thing to have your spouse come home, make you clean the lovers cum and then insult you afterward. I what ducking planet is that even remotely considered love?

    Fuck me, why didn't she castrate him and then make him into some cock sucking homo? Because that's what she did emotionally.

    on Lorraine Can be Naughty Too (1)
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