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She thought too of the other men, the ones sitting before their computers, their hands wrapped around their cocks, who beat off as she was being beaten. Their hands now sticky with their own cum. The ones who yearned for her, even as they yearned for a wife who would be so compliant and submissive. No more talk of headaches. Just kneel on the floor and suck me, bitch. And she thought of the wives of those few who had the guts and the means to ask or demand that their partners be as compliant. Of the women who would end up that night bound and dominated as she had been. Their pussies explored and violated. Their tits abused. Their assholes rent with all manner of degrading objects.
Then she turned to look at Jack's crotch and the stiff tent between his legs, knowing at that moment that the night's activities weren't over, and that their audience would indeed see her again drowning in a gusher of cum, and twisting in a net of pain and pleasure. She looked at his growing erection and knew that their home life would never be the same. That he would want this often, and she would need it often. And damn the consequences, because if god didn't want people to do it, he wouldn't have made it feel this good.
She felt a touch of dread growing in her but let the aggression stamp it out. Jack could try and break her and she welcomed the challenge, but in being out of control she had the power. And she knew that she'd always possess it, even when she let him possess her.
So she turned and breathed a simple answer back to him, "Yes."
The End
- COMMENTS
Anonymous3 months agoYes, it's a work of erotic fiction. And a bloody good one, too. I read it straight through and felt how she challenged him and enjoyed what he was doing.
Anonymous12 months agoGiving credit for the writing skill and the perseverance of the author in parsing out the details of the plot in a slow but steady fashion sufficient to keep a reader reading...
I have to state that very little of the "punishment" inflicted upon the cheating wife was in any way erotic, and the steady abuse of the wife by the husband (and his unnecessary helpers) was not only distasteful but counterproductive to convincing me that the wife was not only deserving of her punishment but logically and rationally changed from a passionate (though inhibited) loving wife to a totally subservient slut.
I checked 4 stars that I "liked it"; but I don't.
But kudos on your writing accomplishment.
MLJ
Anonymousover 1 year agoSo many unanswered questions. Did her parents know. What of the Pastor?.
No women can go 2 hours without talking to he mommie or another Woman, how did he manage to keep them at bay for 2 weeks without the authorities showing up?.
She was ordered to upload and place on a c/d 3 different times - pictures of porn in reflection, why were these not uses and open to the viewer?.
Interesting, but around Chapter 12 it's as if you gave up. I liked it but it could have been so so much better.
Wendywants2Btakenover 1 year agoUhhhh to be taken and become my Masters property to use and to give away as he desires is what I was put here on earth for❤️❤️💋💋
Anonymousabout 2 years agoIn reading this story from start to finish, I found it intreging, as we follow the wife thru 2 weeks of being changed into a submissive sex slut. A few times, I kept wondering who was hit by the "Martian Slut Ray", as at times BOTH seemed to have been hit by it. I realize this is supposed to be a BDSM story (at least a couple of chapters were), and it seemed like most of the rest was Loving Wives, with a little Non-Consent thrown in. At times I really disliked the Jack character and at others I felt sorry for Judy having to put up with his BS. But then that was the way the story was written. I also realize the story is fiction, but there are some truths mixed in, as all one has to do is look up some BDSM porn on the net. Overall I really hoped for a different ending. Maybe that's the romantic in me, but I did like the story as it kept the reader coming back if for nothing else but to find out what was going to happen next.
