A Backwoods Tale

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MrJack
MrJack
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When my breath returned, I sat up and looked at that nekid gal. I leaned over and gave her a sticky-wet kiss. We kissed and tongue-fucked a few minutes and then I sat up and pulled her up and plopped her into my lap. I said, "Janie, gal that was a sure-fine birthday present you gave me! That's the best one I ever had! You've got a mighty-fine pussy for fucking! I've sure had a lot of enjoyment with this present!"

Janie wasn't the least bit shy. She was smiling as she replied, "Well, Jimmie the giving of this present of fucking to you was a lot of fun for me, too. Anytime you want some more, you just let me know!"

I hugged her and kissed her and stood up with her cradled in my arms. I carried her towards the slow-running creek. I told her, "Gal, we got a mess all over each other! I didn't know that this fucking business was so messy! We got to get cleaned up before heading home."

I carried Janie into waist-deep water and pitched her out of my arms. She landed with a splash. She's got a wicked temper, but she didn't get mad. She stood and splashed water on me. We splashed, and tussled, and wrastled then we washed off each others slimy, sticky, nekid body. We washed off honey and cream and we washed off virgin blood.

That gal kept on grabbing at my cock. Well, that fella was limp and done for. And it wasn't the cold water of the creek that done it. That gal had drained every bit of juice out of it! Why, she'd done it twiced today!

That sister of mine was for-sure getting cock-crazy, but I reckon I didn't mind! I didn't mind at all! I reckoned that a fella that's pussy-whipped-crazy ought to have a sister that's cock-crazy. That way, they'd be able to team-up for some fine sucking and fucking together!

We finished our swim and bath, dressed, and headed home. I bagged three fat squirrels along the quiet homeward bound path. Our family could have some fine eating for supper.

As we came into sight of the backdoor, Janie stopped me with a worried look on her face. She looked at me and said, "Jimmie, Ma noticed my messed-up hair after we played around in the outhouse this morning. Well, my hair is in a tangled-wet mess now and she'll notice for-sure! She'll know we been swiming and that we didn't take nothing to wear. She might suspect that something else happened! Jimmie, what do you think she'll say?"

I don't know what made me think it and I don't know why I said it aloud, but and idea came straight out of my head and I told it to Janie. I said, "I don't think she'll say nothing at all!"

Turns out that I was abso-damn-lutely right! We walked in the backdoor just as Ma was putting the noonday meal on the table. She looked toward us and saw our still-wet hair. I reckon she saw through our attempts to hide the guilt on our faces, yet she didn't say nothing! She said nary a word!

We all sat and had our meal. That fresh honey tasted mighty-nice on them fresh-baked homemade biscuits Ma had made. All the gals seemed to like it. Of course, me and Janie liked it. We were tasting memories of kissing, sucking, and fucking.

Ma liked the honey, too. I looked at Janie and she looked at me. We both had the same thought speaking silently in our heads, "If Ma only knowed what we'd done with that honey!"

Of course now, this wasn't the only thought running wildly through mind right now. I had no doubt that my cock-loving sis would probably sneak into my lean-to room tonight and climb into my bed. As a pussy-whipped fella, I knowed I wouldn't be bothered by this at all.

The only thing that did bother me was the illusive answer my questioning mind was wondering about. When I fuck that gal in my nighttime bed, just what in this world can I do to tone down some of her pleasureful squeals and screams!

MrJack
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davidfpdavidfpabout 3 years ago

I loved the hillbilly background story. I did find it annoying that you continuously kept referring to his sister as "that gal". It would make for better reading to simply say "my sister" or her name.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Poorly Written . . .

by someone pretending to be from the backwoods. Too much effort was used to create words that someone from the backwoods wouldn't be using.

Sadly there are many people whose families lack the financial ability to enable their children to acquire the proper education. In addition, as those areas often lack sufficient funding to employ the educators that would teach the children the proper use of the English language, and to motivate them in that regard.

Ridiculing them for something they have no control over is childish.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
One fine story (or is it factual?)

While he had his young hard cock deep in her belly, I thought Pa may amble along with his big cock dangling out of his jeans and at least get her to suck it. Perhaps in the future she will accompany her brother and father into the woods and come home with both their seeds in her belly. If Ma knows she took the stud, you can bet Pa can smell her having taken brothers cock.

And it occurs to me she may be bred and carrying their first child. I can't help but wonder what the internal view of her pussy would look with him pumping and then shooting his seed deep into his sister. As for the incest aspects; many sisters have entertained their brothers' and/or fathers' cocks. That may or may not be "right", but it is just human nature. Hope there are more chapters to this story. It is well written and enjoyable. Just ignore the negative comments as I bet those guys jerked off to your writing!

Hope future installments describe their bodies and how they looked as he mounted and fucked her. Like how his ass looks (hopefully hairy) and how slender and muscular it is as he humps and then plants his seed. And what his cock looks like; we have a good description of her pussy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Crap

Common. I'm a redneck in Tennessee and I wouldn't even think about doing it in an outhouse.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
right

You are right in your introduction. The exaggerated dialekt is distracting. I was born and grew up in those mountains. My Pa made 'Shine' and Ma made babies. By the way, being a 'Moonshiner' isn't for the lazy. Anyway, as ignorant as I am I can spell and my 18yr old sister never was dumb enough not to know that creamy stuff came out of my Peter. We saw enough Bulls covering Cows not to know what happened. And we ALL saw what Pa did with Ma, living on top of each other like we done. But we, me and sis, gave each other what we want most whenever. Meaning each other. We learned what each other felt and looked like real young, which was a kind of innocent incest as we were about six. By the way, this was a really dumb place to put a story about sex. Nobody in our mountains ever had a 2-holer, and that isn't any place you want to get a blow job no matter how bad you want one. It stinks bad and theres spiders and its dark and either hot or cold. A better place woulda been at the swim hole or while tending to Pa's still. Theres no problem with a place for Brother and Sister to do their thing. Most every family I know has a Pickup or Car with grass grown up around it in the backyard and a big Propane tank to hide behind. Not that they'd need to hide for long. It doesn't take long for everybody on the mountain to know everybody els'es business. Even folks we've never met, we know who they spend the nights with. As the saying goes in our part of the country, "when the sun goes down, you can hear the footsteps crunchin' the gravel on the road". Everybody is visiting somebody elses wife or sister!

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