- NonHuman
- A Darker Love
- Page 2
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"You have no where to go. The rooms in my palace are endless, each leading back into the other."
"Why me? I didn't ask for this. I didn't ask for you." She yanked her hand away and stared up at him.
His dark eyes lit with suppressed passion. He held himself stiffly, his jaw clenched tightly. He was angry that she still rejected him.
"The pure-souls said you were to be mine."
- COMMENTS
isis81almost 14 years agoI really enjoy your story - and I don't mind a strong alpha male...to a point - but it always bugs me when the woman isn't given a choice. It can't really be love if he gives her no voice whatsoever. I do hope you continue and that she gets more power.
Anonymousover 15 years agoloved it!!! please please write more!
wanna know what happens to them! please!
Anonymousalmost 16 years agoreturn to your Darker Love series. Please, please, please?! I don't care where you take the characters, I just want more.
Anonymousabout 16 years agoI love this story and chapter 2 as well, the only thing I saw to even think about a possible improvement was to go through and keep the names of your heroine's the same. You bounce from one name Alilia or something along that line, to Amy at least one time in the second story.
Anonymousabout 16 years agoi can't wait to read more of this story..it's got a great start..write more soon..please..
