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Click hereIt was early in the morning, as he waited outside Jacob's house in his stylish black Audi. He waited there for a few hours till Jacob's parents left the house then he proceeded towards the front door. He bashed at the door in a furious state. Was he angry because this sleazebag was dating his daughter or was he angry that he couldn't have her for himself?
Jacob answered the door and was immediately shocked by Mark at the front of his house. Jacob tried to close the door but struggled as Mark budged his way in. "Get the hell out of here you psycho!" Jacob demanded.
"I thought I paid you off to stay away from my daughter!" Mark shouted.
"Let's just call it I don't tell your daughter compensation." Jacob chuckled fearlessly.
"You remember what I said if you ever go near my daughter again...I will kill you!" Mark began slowly putting on some black gloves.
"Hey man...what you doing?" Jacob asked, with fear filling his eyes. Mark put on the final glove and closed the door behind him.
- COMMENTS
mezmerizedabout 6 years agohaving the hots for his daughter, and feeling her up, a little, during the massage, what was the purpose, unless you continue the story? She didn't even know Dad was hot for her... only his friends.
Anonymousover 11 years agoNOW I'm interested. *rubs hands together* Let's do this! lol. I'll tolerate less than stellar prose every once in a while, especially if the descriptions are entertainingly laid out. Remember how conversation naturally flows, how people interact, and try to pay attention to various authors favored means of portraying human interaction on an individual scale as you read "real-world" fiction. Let the reader infer certain things, when it is permissible, and remember the limitations (and advantages) inherent to the literary form at the same time. I'm undeniably curious to see how this scenario will play out. Good luck to you as you continue to write and express the literary visions previously trapped within your head! ;)
PS: Please pardon any grievous grammatical or spelling mistakes on my part; I try to be meticulous in proofing my online and offline correspondence, but it is very late, and my inner gammarian has fallen asleep. :)
jal901over 11 years agoAuthorThanks for reading the story. I'm sorry if you're disappointed in the quality of the writing and possibly storyline. The thing about me is I can come up with great ideas but can't really portray them in the best possible way! I will post the next part soon which I hope people will enjoy!
