A Long Stormy Night Ch. 01

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"Now ain't that a sight for soar eyes aye boys," Clem snickers, taking a long gulp of whiskey, before passing the bottle to Jake.

"Heh, heh, can we cum in her Pops," Virgil inquired"

"I don't see why not, after we torch this place ain't gonna much of that there forensic evidence left behind, so I guess it's a free for all." He takes back the bottle and raises it high toward his younger son, who's not having an easy time finding the vaginal entrance in the dark room.

"Hey boy what's taking you so long," Clem asks.

"I can't find the door in the dark Pops."

"It's a miracle you can find your own cock Jughead."

A flash of lightening brightens the room and Virgil finds his mark, "I found it."

"Thank god, now show that wench what you got boy."

Jenny squirms and tries desperately to avoid the rock hard penis invasion.

"Clem takes another swing of his alcoholic beverage and remarked; "Now there ain't no sense in you squirming gal, just lie there and take it. Ain't nobody coming to save you."

"Wanna bet," a strong, deep powerful voice calls out behind them.

All heads turn toward the large shadowy figure standing at the bedroom doorway.

TO BE CONTINUED...

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
I'm a hater too.

I hate this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
re: Anynomous you are a hater!

Wow, That person wrote two wh9le sentences, neither of which had anything to do with you except maybe violate some feeling that only those think as you do are allowed to have an opinion. You, on the other hand, are the one who made it into a personal attack -- and THAT person is the hater? You have a fucked up definition of the word.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
poor decadent pussy

I guess this is the only place in the world you have something to say. I wonder why.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
I stopped at the first paragraph.

Show, don't tell. But I don't suppose you know what that means. Back to your day-job, you can't write.

DecadentdessertDecadentdessertover 12 years ago

I'll be damn this limp dick mother fucker reached out to me through feedback. Trust when I tell you, I am not the person to fuck with. If the truth hurts then grow a set. Being anynomous allows you to be a big dick, without consequences. Please be aware there are others like me that will stand up to hate mongers like yourself and shut you down.

Your lack of talent and creativity comes through loudly when you attempt to squash others who take the risk and try. If you want Shakespeare take your lame asses to the library. This is why stories on this site often go incomplete because of asses like you. I really hope that Ron will continue.

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