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Lynn felt herself being moved again and felt the dull ache of the nipple clamps get sharper as gravity pulled the chain downwards. She felt Al standing in front of her and forced herself to open her eyes. Her vision was blurred by the unshed tears and she blinked rapidly to clear them as she heard Al say, " You have done very well my own one. As you have done so well, I will let you rest a little before I commence your punishment." It was all she could do to stop herself calling out as she saw Al walk away from her, and flinched as he turned back to say, "Don't go away now!" and laugh mirthlessly. He disappeared from view and Lynn was left suspended and alone. She began to ache and wanted to relieve the tension in her body. She tried to move but found that, although she could move a fraction, the slightest movement made the frame tremble and caused the clamps to bite. She gave a sigh and willed herself to be a still as possible, praying that this was all a bad dream and that it would soon be over.
(To be continued)
- COMMENTS
comicfairyalmost 18 years agoYou may want to trim your paragraphs, as big bulky paragraphs are a lot for some. Easier in this online context to simplify things a bit. ^_^
And I like your writing, although I do think you need to give the characters (particularly the male protagonist) more of a background. Why is he there? What does he hope to accomplish? Why/how did he manage to get her friends to participate in his plans? .. etc. It all came out of left field, so to speak. The dialogue was also pretty run of the mill...or maybe I've just been reading too much bdsm lately? *chuckle*
Keep up the good work, though! <3
