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(To be continued...)
Like it? Loathe it? Please take just a moment and give me your marks for this story. Even better, please leave me some feedback. It's always good to hear what you all think! Chapter five is coming soon. Cheers, Chris Cross.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 6 years agoAll 4 of the chapters that I've read are really well-developed and easy reading. The descriptive terms for most of the "antics" were constructed IAW good English grammar. Looking forward to more.
MRSheaover 11 years agoHaving read the previous chapters, I like the realistic feel of it. Not every encounter is flawless,as some stories would suggest. Thank you!
Anonymousabout 17 years agoReally well done! Great use of the language, very literate and flows well. Very nicely done artwork as well. Overall a 10!
Anonymousabout 18 years agoABOUT THE STORY, IT IS VERY GOOD, MAIRE IS GOOD WITH BIG BREASTS,WITH THE GUYS BED NEXT TO THE WALL,HOPE MAIRE AND THE OTHER GIRL GET IT ON WITH THE GUY.THANKS
Anonymousover 18 years agoI'm so glad you add condoms in your story too. Seen too many people dying for lack of their use that there is no longer the time to indulge in fanciful unprotected sex , and we know some people cannot separate fantasy from reality when in the throws of their sexual urge. So, start as you mean to go on. However, does anyone out there know where you can get condoms that do not taste so synthetic? I've tried flavoured, plain, etc but I can always taste the rubber!
