- BDSM
- An Abuse of Power Ch. 02
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Six days have passed since he explained what a submissive is and what his expectations would be of one. He's given her a week to think about it. And in the spirit of fairness, he's made it clear she will remain in his house despite her answer. But he wants her, no, needs her to say yes. It will be so much more fulfilling if he knows she wants to be there.
In the meantime, she has blossomed. The house is immaculate. His bed is always turned down at the end of the day and he's never even seen her touch his clothes, but they are always cleaned and pressed and returned to his closet. Whenever he has seen her, she smiles shyly before her eyes fall to the floor.
He replays their conversation in his mind for the hundredth time. She's obviously inexperienced, but, not a virgin. She said nothing during his explanation, but her eyes widened at several points. He explained the significance of the collar, his expectations and summed it up with "if you do what I want, you will be rewarded. If you do not, you will be punished. It is really that simple."
This week has been agonizing. Tomorrow, I will know tomorrow. He keeps repeating to himself. He tosses and turns that night, when he wakes up it feels like he's barely slept at all. But he spies a sheet of paper on the floor.
Written in beautiful cursive is:
Hard Limits
Nothing that will leave a mark that lasts more than 24 hours, including burning or caning.
Nothing involving bodily waste.
No doing or saying anything that would let my family know what we are doing.
No hitting my face.
If you can agree with these, than I will be your sub.
Sincerely,
Katherine
He raises his eyebrows as he reads, surprised that she would have thought of these items, but impressed that she is taking advantage of a sub's ability to set hard limits. His past subs came up with limits only when things went too far. This sub is obviously more thoughtful than the others.
As he exits his room he spies her in the hallway, leaning in close as he passes he whispers "be in my room at 7:00 tonight." She blushes, gives her small shy smile and nods before moving on.
When he enters his room, she is sitting calmly on the bed, her legs crossed at the ankles. She doesn't smile, in fact, she seems...depleted. His heart sinks, has she changed her mind?
"I-I need, I'd like to ask you a favor" she stammers. Her eyes flick between her folded hands sitting in her lap, and his face; she sounds apprehensive. He nods encouragingly. "It's my sister" she says, pausing to steal a glance at him. He says nothing but again nods. "She's broken her arm" she says timidly. "She's broken her arm and she's trying to hide it from the guards, but she's assigned to dig trenches and it won't be long before they find out. I need her to go somewhere where she can heal, without any of the guards knowing she's hurt" she says, the words tumbling over each other in her haste and nervousness.
His eyes widen in surprise, he's never heard her speak so much.
"Welllllll" he says slowly, his mind reeling. "That can be arranged. I suppose she could go to the medical facility, and roll bandages, deliver meals to patients, that sort of thing" he answers carefully.
"Thank you!" she says, her face brightening and she lunges forward, hugging him. He reaches up and carefully unwraps her arms from around his neck. She sees his stricken face and pulls back, suddenly apprehensive. "What is it?" she asks.
"Have you seen your family since you arrived?" he asks, woodenly.
She looks like she's been slapped. "No, no I haven't" she answers, her voice thick with emotion. Her answer is like a punch to the gut. He nods, collecting his thoughts. She watches him as he stands, and then begins pacing.
"So, when would you like to begin my training?" she asks, tentatively, not sure if interrupting his pacing is a good idea.
"Tomorrow" he answers, brusquely. She nods, confused by his sudden change, but stands and walks to the door. She has one foot in the hallway when he stops her.
"Did you agree to be my sub just because of your family?" he blurts out.
She turns to look at him, understanding dawning on her face. "In part" she answers. "But, I also want to be your sub, very much" she adds, blushing brightly before she wishes him goodnight and shuts the door softly behind her.
He sits down heavily. His mind racing, cock throbbing. He jumps up and races to his desk, where he begins to furiously scribble all his training plans for his new sub.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoAnon, some of us use our brains as well as our genitals.
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoIf it is historically accurate or wouldnt really happen, or even if its taboo? There is A LOT MORE worse shit on this site than this. You read the title so dont be all shocked when you read it. WRITER: You did a good job! It got my cock hard and afterall. THAT IS THE POINT PEOPLE! to get us hard or wet.
North200almost 10 years agoMy comment is that (in my opinion) your choice of setting overpowers the story. I'm reading about these characters but my knowledge of the atrocities that are being committed "in the background" never leaves me, and that knowledge overpowers whatever mood you're trying to create. I also question the sudden turnaround from "rape victim" to "devoted submissive". You certainly know your way around a sentence, but the setting and the context of the story makes it hard for me to enjoy. But...you did get everyone's attention...and that's not necessarily a bad thing...
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoBeside all the things said about the setting, which is indeed a bit...sensitive..I found this second part a bit like a bleak cup of tea. The strong and non-con thing that was going on suddenly watered down. Thats a damn shame. Turn on the intensity and if your nickname means you are being punished to write stories better get on it.
Think about the things that are so intense and embaressing, put it on here.
Replace the setting out of WOII or leave it at WOII but just write it intensely. Detailed.
Please write more
Shysub412almost 10 years agoThe pictures of the shaven headed woman after the war in occupied countries such as the Netherlands and France are testament to this, yet this story has no basis in fact, it's not badly written, i thought I'd been clear on that, it's not the style of writing i object to, it's the seemingly trivialisation of a horrific era in history that i object to, and the lack of any emotion. The journey from being a forced victim to a willing submissive has been way to short. It takes a great deal of time for any submissive to give themselves to that One person, to trust implicitly and grow together, and that's when both sides consent to this way of life. Add to that the situation that we all know from history that is happening in the background to this story, it just doesn't work on any level.
Again, I'm NOT critiquing the writing style as i am unable to be a fair judge as the story line itself annoys me so much. i would never outright blast a person brave enough to put pen to paper and write on their writing style if i can't read the story through fair eyes. I would hate to think that any comments would stop you writing, just i won't read any more of this story, although if you publish another story with a different setting I'd have no issue reading it.
