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[We have things to discuss.]
[I'm in no mood...]
[Now.]
With a snarl Emmett turns and lopes back to the house.
- COMMENTS
Pteroisover 7 years agoFantastic job on the characters! They really carry the story so well. Its refreshing and engaging to have male lead who isn't always in control (or the alpha) but is still considerate and respectful. Lyssa is a very likable lead too; I fell for her character so much more because you didn't define her by "perfect" or "flawless" looks but her strong and practical character. I wanted to compliment you on that before continuing on with reading. :)
Anonymousover 9 years agoI agree with the other reader- I really like your originality in making Emmett a beta, not Alpha. All the other stories I've read on this site have Alphas as lead characters. This is so much more interesting!
