- Incest/Taboo
- Ann
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I crawl up to Ann and kiss her, in total gratitude and love for accepting me and giving me what I had only dream about all these years.
"Ringggggggg". It is the phone ringing.
Both of us were exhausted and did not want to take the call, but the ringing did not stop.
Finally, I get up and answer the call.
It is my wife and I tell her that I will be home shortly.
To be continued if readers think this story is acceptable.
- COMMENTS
BakaGaijinover 11 years agoThis was a great story, not only did it contain lots of sex in graphic detail the story also expresses passion in a way most stories on Literotica cannot even come close to achieving.
Ann, PLEASE keep writing!
I look forward to seeing many more of your stories in the future.
Anonymousover 13 years agoThis, badly missed the mark in several key ways as others have mentioned. The changing tense; poor vocab; using both force and anal in what, otherwise, attempts to be a tender loving story; also, the lack of any buildup or much back story. There could be much more description for the senses as well.
Anonymousover 14 years agoway to forceful for me i couldn't even finish as soon as you started the force i quit it is never good you need to be bitch slapped it is never acceptable to use force it only proves he really doesn't love her
Anonymousover 16 years agoI would have liked a bit more of a set up about these two, but I can overlook that otherwise. I did notice that you went back and forth between tenses and that was distracting. One minute you would be speaking in a past tense, as in "I wrapped my arms around her body." And then in the very next sentence, you jumped back to present tense, as in "Her hair falls on my arm." It's also unclear what the trigger was - why did the narrator finally decide to take his sister? Was there a defining moment? <br><br>
And the anal sex as their first sexual intercourse was also disappointing to me. First, he talks several times about wanting to impregnate her, and she seems excited by the idea. So what is the big deal about "no sex without a condom"? How about pulling out? And I must say, while some women get pregnant at the drop of a hat, most do not. We have cycles, times when we are more fertile, and even then, it's not a sure thing. Getting pregnant, especially for an older woman, is actually a lot tougher than you might think. I'd say this was definitely more of a story for men, who seem to like anal a lot more than most women do.
