Audit Surprise Ch. 03

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I was devastated. I just sat there and sobbed. My life was over. I was never going to be with the love of my life.

"Oh God, oh God, why me?" I murmured to myself over and over and over. Marty got up and brought me a box of tissues and then left me alone to cry. When I looked up minutes later I saw him in the kitchen surrounded by his friends, the little Asian woman had her head on his shoulder. Now I understood what they meant when Mandy and Adrianna told me he had moved on. I was the past and his new Asian girlfriend was his future. I sat and cried until the daylight started to fade.

I composed myself enough to walk through the kitchen and go to the bathroom. I did my face again and put on a brave demeanor before going out. Everybody was standing in the living room talking to Marty. When he saw me he held out an envelope. "This is your part of the sale of the condo and I wrote the URL of the video on the back."

Just like that it was over. My hopes of getting him back were gone. Also gone was the last shred of my self-respect. I had to start my life over but without him.

Marty walked me out to my car. I held his hand one last time and softly said goodbye as I kissed the cheek of the man that I loved, yet destroyed. I opened the car door and stood there for a moment wondering if I had the courage to look back at him one last time. I found enough to turn my head. What I saw ended my life. Marty was standing on the curb with his arm around the waist of the little Asian woman and hers was around his. All in a line behind him were Mandy and Adrianna and the tall redheaded man and the frightening girl with all the piercings. Each one of them had their hand out in front of them with their middle finger extended upward. The message was loud and clear. 'Fuck off!'

Now I totally understood Marty's pain.

The End.

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AnonymousAnonymous23 days ago

Still lying? She described being with Tom as making love. And how he brought to her new heights and strongest orgasms she ever had. So much so that she looked forward to being with him. Yet now she says it was half as good as being with Marty for one night.

It wasn't about not having confidence in her abilities. That is a made up scape goat meant to make the patient feel better about themselves. It was because she was selfish, much more so than what she felt for her husband. And she proved it over and over again, including this last chapter since it was all about her wants, needs, and feelings instead of his.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

the url, although well deserved, is not supposed to be there

c24jc24jabout 1 month ago

A sad and good tale with growth for all involved. She was indeed, a very sick woman, but the men who took advantage of her were even sicker. Unfortunately, there are places and people like that. She could take some minor comfort in that she was no longer like that, and had grown past it, but at such a very heavy cost.

I loved the giving the phone the finger thing. It really illustrated a point seldom seen in LW writing . . . it's not so much whom you lie with, but whom you lie to. That single action demonstrated greater betrayal than all the adulterous sex.

I actually think, in the end, she put a little too much blame on herself when it came to the men's families. They were all complete assholes, even the one who was kind to her. ANY of them could not only have chosen not to not participate, but with a veiled threat could have stopped the whole thing. Those four were pretty much completely responsible for the breakup and misery to their families. Those tragedies weren't really on her.

The last scene of them giving her the finger was a bit petty, but I can see how they all would feel that way. I think it would have been kinda' neat (and indicated some degree of progress) if she'd smiled with sad amusement and gave them all the finger right back. It sort of would have shown an ironic sign of respect. After all, she'd finally established that she gave the finger to the one she loved most!!

Buster2UBuster2Uabout 1 month ago

100 Big Blazing Stars for the writer for the VERY MOST EPIC STORY THAT I HAVE EVER READ! We got to see the betrayal by this wife from both her poor husband's POV and from her own POV. This poor woman destroyed completely the lives of 5 families with her own ambition, low self-esteem, and fucking her boss. I am afraid that this story seems to have much more facts and reality within it than one would expect from most of our stories on Literotica. Women trying to work their way up in the business field and into Corporation Mgmnt is brutal and pussy is required. Heck, I even dated a woman once who was trying to do the same thing at the Corp she worked at, when I lived in Silicon Valley. It seems to just be a fact of life. Men want pussy, Women have pussy. Women want a promotion, women have to give up that pussy. All the young Hotties I had when I was young all fucked around, All of them. LOL, I guess that is just human nature. Either get used to it or ignore it or get another divorce and move on. Sex is something special between a man and a woman. It doesn't have to be, and it can be demeaned. It can be given away, or sold and disrespected. But when we don't respect these special moments of physical love with our spouse and just "screw around" we are risking EVERYTHING for a few moments of pleasure. Example: Sodom and Gomorrah. Life is a learning experience and a test at the end when we come before The Lord for judgment. There is always "Crying and Gnashing of Teeth" because everybody has sinned more than we should. But few are forgiven and go to heaven. There is a God, choose to believe it or not. Don't believe at your own peril as "being good" doesn't count for anything unless you don't break ANY of the 10 commandments. Enuf said. Thanks, Buster2U

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

I have read this story at least three times, and it has remained high on my favorites list.

Five stars is not enough.

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