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Click hereAfter a few seconds, I was able to look up. A man in darkened silver armor was holding the girl against him. Her once naked body was covered in a gray cloak, while her face was inward as if unable to bear the sight of me. The knight pointed an ornate sword with a mask carved on the hilt at me as he spoke, "Keep the book. You will find it useless to you against our kind." Each word filled hate and malice. With that done, a 'pop' and they were gone. A final thought filled my head. Every Mage I find from that point forward will not escape me with their lives.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 7 years agoPlease write more, it is a fabulous story. Can't wait to read many more chapters.
Anonymousabout 8 years agoI hope your planning to write many more pages for this story, it's fabulous! Please write more, lots more. I can't wait to read it. Hurry!
Magus_Roninover 14 years agoI quite enjoyed your story, though I did find the shifting between first-person perspectives to be a little disorienting. I don't know that there is a really good way to handle that technique, which is probably why it's fairly unusual in literature. However, it did offer a perspective in the story that I doubt could have been conveyed in third person.
arghjacover 15 years agoHi,one of your stories was recommended as being similar to one of mine, so I took the trouble to read. I feel pride that my own, although completely different in theme, should be compared to your own excellent writing. Well done I loved it.
