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Moments later, I lifted my head and looked out the window to realize that we were pulling into the mall parking lot. I lifted myself off the back of the seat as Jeff pulled his cock out of me and leaned back on his heels as he began massaging my ass cheeks.
"That was great," Jeff said softly. "We are definitely going to get an A on this project."
A few minutes later, parked near the mall entrance, we all piled out of the van fully clothed. I reached into my purse for a scrap of paper and a pen, scribbled down my name and address and as I handed it to Jeff, I smiled and said, "Please send me a copy when your documentary is complete."
I felt all of their eyes on me as I walked into the mall and headed for the Victoria's Secret store. I walked right in and purchased the red teddy that I had admired earlier, along with a few other items that I could now afford to splurge on.
A few weeks later, I smiled as I opened my mailbox to see a small brown package. Racing into the house as I ripped it open, I paused in the living room to read the little note attached to it.
Kelly,Just wanted to let you know that we did get an A
on the project. The professor had to watch it alone,
as he couldn't allow the class to see it. I have another
project in mind and you would be just perfect for it.
Perhaps I will be contacting you soon.Thanks Again!
Jeff
I laughed as I flipped the tape over and read the title "Backseat Bangers".
- COMMENTS
Johnboy9about 12 years agoI really did like this story, gave it 4 stars. But I feel it's lacking that certain something that will keep me coming back to it again and again, keeping me from listing it among my favorites. I think it has something to do with just how quickly Kelly allowed her latent exhibitionist desires to surface, and how quickly and totally she lost control of them. As a first read story, it is exciting, hot and fresh, but it offers nothing lasting and really new. I think if you rework this so that once Kelly steps into the van and the exhibition games start, you might have her begin by actually just talking to the guys at first, with her bra off, but being too nervous and otherwise conservative to let them get anywhere with her in a sexual way, although you must have them try, most definitely.
Have the boys give her surreptitious touches, which she acknowledges by slapping their hands away and reminding them that this is a school project, and she is not there to be their plaything. Then, you can slowly, slowly have her resolve weaken as the touches eventually get to her. You might even have the boys, seeing they are gradually wearing down Kelly's resistance, realize that this is a more fun game - slight touches, rather than overt gropes, and filming the ultimate seduction and downfall of a chaste, pure maiden, so to speak. Until finally it is she who is literally begging for their hands, mouths and cocks.
That kind of story in this kind of setting would make a far more fun read, one more likely to want to be read over and over again, because, as I said, your story is quite well done, so your writing style is fine, your technique down pat. These changes would enhance the story greatly, I believe, and your writing style would do it justice.
However, this is just a suggestion.
RossDanielsover 12 years agoHottest story I've read in awhile. After watching a few vids like this, it was fun to read an account from a woman's perspective. Nicely done!
Anonymousabout 20 years agoGreat story - good written and hot !
But the best thing is : It works that way ! (see BangBus or others ...)
