Bad Fortune of a Poor Father Ch. 03

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At this point the bartender came to Khaled and Salim telling them they needed to leave because he wanted to close the place.
“You’ll continue this story tomorrow at the same time, right Salim?”
“Yeah, sure. But we have to meet elsewhere”
“Where do you want me to meet you?”
“I’ll give you the address of Lieutenant Fawzi”
“Isn’t he one of the men under General Raji?”
“Yes. But he is also the one leading the resistance against him now…”

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
keep going...

i like what you write...

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digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 13 years ago
It might make the story a little confusing by adding another villain

There's already an excellent villain to hate in the young stud that destroyed Khaled's mother and father. Now we have the General to hate.

It might make the story a little confusing and water down the first villain if the General is more hateful than the young stud.

Thanks for the chapter.

MizTMizTover 13 years ago
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I'm not so sure this story line belongs in the "Loving Wives" category. If these women truly cared anything for there husbands they wouldn't be so distracted by a big fat cock. I don't know yet if I continue to follow this story or not.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
great start

gret start--keep up the good work!

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