Becoming Dominant Ch. 03

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"I, uh," Casey mumbled, "don't really have the money to hire a valet."

"As a matter of fact, you do," Monica corrected him. "But we'll get to that later. How do you feel now?"

He searched for words. "Awesome. Wonderful. Why?"

"Can you control yourself? Or if I walk away from this table, are you going to grab Tori and spread her over it?"

"I think I can keep it together," Casey answered, but he loved the look of complete willingness in Tori's eyes.

"Then I think we should adjourn to the suite, make arrangements to be on the next flight home and spend the rest of the time making sure you're as satisfied as can be before we spend hours in an airport and on a plane."

Casey's grin widened. "Okay," he said, but then put his hand on Tori's. "One last question. You really don't feel any jealousy at all?" he asked.

Tori shook her head slowly. "No. Not when it came to Monica. Not when it comes to you. I'm perfectly comfortable being one of many. Like I said, maybe that's the dominance talking, but it feels good. I know what you are. I'm happy to be part of it.

"I'll facilitate every tryst. I'm your confidant, your go-between and your alibi. I'll wait at home for you when you want me to. I'll come to pick you up when you call for me. I'll wait outside when you say so. I'll keep the husband or the boyfriend distracted when you need the privacy with their woman, and I'll lick you clean when you're done. I'll fetch you water or lube or whatever else you want when you're fucking whomever you please. I'm yours whenever you want me. I'll suck that cock all day long if you let me. And I'll have fun doing all of it, too."

"Sexy lingerie?"

"Every day. Dress me like a toy if you want to."

"Monica?" Casey asked.

"Yes, love?"

"I'm crazy about her," he declared, still looking at Tori.

"Good. I'm glad you like your present. I've got a couple more for you back home."

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Feminist…

The story was doing great until you decided to destroy the fantasy by making your main character a feminist. Male feminists are universally creepy and disgusting and not even female feminists want anything to do with them. No genuinely dominant male would EVER lay claim to the title of feminist.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Wonderful

Really, really, really nice. I agree with everyone else about wishing each chapter were longer, but I'll take what I can get. Excellent reinterpretation of the usual definition of the dominant. Much more enjoyable than the typical humiliation and abuse scenario. I hope you write at least another 100 or so chapters.

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 11 years ago
Simply amazing.

I swear this gets better and better each chapter.

I agree that it needs to be longer, but I also know it's hard to turn out that much material so quickly.

Just know I'm loving the story, and am waiting for more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Suggestion

I wouldn't mind waiting longer if each reading was longer. Instead of two pages each, you should combine two entries into one. Otherwise, great story! Definitely keep it up.

-G

dirtysillythoughtsdirtysillythoughtsalmost 12 years agoAuthor
More is on the way!

So I'm about 6700 words in on the next chapter. No guarantees when it'll be done, but I am working on it when I have time. Thank you for all the feedback and votes! They certainly encourage me to keep at it. :)

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