Body of Water Ch. 01

PUBLIC BETA

Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.

You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.

Click here
MugsyB
MugsyB
2,729 Followers

Then why do you leave me? I felt out of sorts.

He shook his head and turned away from me, hiding his face, but not before I saw the wounded expression cross his striking features.

I watched the crowd swallow him up, everyone around him hardly moving, holding an eerie tableau. Then something was yanked loose deep inside my gut and the crowd jerked into motion. The noise of the music and shouting filled my ears again. I shuddered, still feeling the inexplicable heat tingling over every inch of my skin.

"Rina!" Angela appeared at my side, making me jump. She eyed me with a smirk and handed me a fresh blue drink. "What's wrong? You look like you've just run a marathon."

I touched my forehead and cringed as my fingers came away damp. Not a marathon. More like a sprint; a sprint away from rolling, spitting magma.

MugsyB
MugsyB
2,729 Followers
Please rate this story
The author would appreciate your feedback.
  • COMMENTS
Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
25 Comments
ArdieffArdieffover 2 years ago

Intriguing start!

c50chrisc50chrisover 5 years ago
So unique!

Wonderfully different from other stories here.

lynnakimanalynnakimanaabout 9 years ago

You've hooked me. Great first chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Wow

I think I've read this story a million times but every time, every damn time it gets to me. Well this goes to all your stories. You're an amazing writer xo

lust_addictedlust_addictedalmost 13 years ago
What took me so long??

I'm so glad I finally started this series. I first found you because of hockey, and read all of those stories. Even the one by PennLady. So when I finished the last series, I missed you so much I kept checking for updates. But there were none, and I finally decided to read this one. I could just kick my butt for waiting so long!! But better late than never. (:

Show More
Share this Story

READ MORE OF THIS SERIES

Similar Stories

Bound to My Mate Ch. 01 A chance encounter with her life mate.in NonHuman
Sacrifice A voluntary sacrifice meets an unexpected end.in NonHuman
Hunted She is captured by a Bosnian sniper.in NonConsent/Reluctance
Hero's Reward One brave deed holds the key to unlocking a scarred heart.in Romance
The Taking of Lena Ch. 01 An innocent chambermaid is taken by a wealthy lord.in NonConsent/Reluctance
More Stories