Broken Hearted Son

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A mother comforts her son whose just been dumped.
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As we talked I kept reassuring him by rubbing his strong shoulders. I'd been passing by his room when I noticed him sitting on his bed sobbing. It didn't surprise me to hear that he'd caught his girlfriend performing oral sex on one of his friends in the school parking lot. I never did trust her, and guessed that she was a dirty little slut when I first met her.

"Dear, you deserve some nice girl, not some tramp." I told him as I continued to massage him. My boy was a handsome young man and there were lots of girls out there who would appreciate him.

We were each in our robes, and I pulled mine tighter as I scooted closer to him. Poor boy, I felt so bad for him. Josh sobbed a little more, then turned his head to place on on my shoulder.

"I loved her...how can I trust another girl again?" He whispered, sad and heartbroken.

I told him that she'd a big mistake by fooling around with that other boy. Josh lowered his head and pushed my robe open a little to feel my warmth. I understood -- a woman's breasts are the safest places in the world for a guy. I remember nursing his as an infant and how it would always make him stop crying when he latched his lips around my nipples. I kissed his forehead and could feel him start to relax. My robe loosened and he moved even lower between my breasts. His skin pressed against mine as he sighed. I knew this was exactly what he needed, and let him linger there, warm and safe.

"You just forget about her, OK?" I whispered to him as his hands reached up and lifted my breasts up. Before I could stop him, his lips had wrapped around my nipples and now he was noisily sucking on my left one, while his fingers ran long my right one. I gasp and pulled gently on his head, trying to get him to release me.

"There, there, honey, but we can't...." The awkwardness started to bother me and I needed to bring this back down, but Josh is very strong and he had me held tightly as he switched breasts. His tongue ran around my nipple and he took it inside his mouth. I tried not to moan, but it had been a long time since a man had sucked on them, that I froze in the moment.

Moving my hand lower, I pushed gently on his legs, and suddenly felt something warm and stiff -- his robe had come undone and I was now touching my son's erect penis. It was Josh's turn to moan and when he did, his lips vibrated against my nipple, sending an electric shock down my body.

"Oh, mom.. That feels so good..." He gasp as he let my nipple slip out of his mouth.

My fingers wrapped around his erection and gave it a few pulls, not thinking any farther ahead than the pleasure I was feeling by touching his cock.

"Mom... Don't stop.. Oh, God..." Josh moaned again and again, making me want to please him even more.

"Don't worry... Mommy is here...." I whispered to him as my hand began to pump his hard cock up and down. His body shook as I took control, and twisted my hand, then slowed down, gripping it tighter as his lips sucked on my tits. When he told me to pump him faster, I didn't hesitate, and soon, I heard his voice call out that he was going to cum. I hadn't intended for this to go all the way, but was too turned on the stop now and readied myself for his orgasm. I turned my head to watch as his cock shot out a big stream of white fluid high in the air.

"Cum honey... It's OK." I urged him as my hand became a blur. Several more strong blasts shot out of his thick cock and most of it landed on my hand. I suddenly wished that I'd placed in my mouth so I could taste the salty juice, but I couldn't reach it. He'd pinned me down so he could have access to my tits.

"Oh.....God...." Josh moaned as I jerked him off, determined to give him a release from all his girl troubles. I played with him for a few more seconds, before letting his sticky penis slip from my hand. I pulled his robe closed and pushed hard, lifting him off me. He turned and fell into his pillow as I got out of the way. Running my hand on my robe to dry it off, I was impressed by the quantity of his load.

"There now sweetheart, you get some sleep now, OK?" I leaned over and kissed his forehead and got slowly up and made my way to the door. He was already fast asleep when I turned out the light...

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Baloney_PonyBaloney_Ponyabout 12 years ago
Peteco? WTFeco?

Here. I cleaned up your post for you. Helped you a bit with the grammar.

Your post:

"hit a nerve did I

You just don't get it your just to condescending. I also read here everyday and have read your comments before. You seem to think you can criticize with immunity"

Should have been:

"Hit a nerve, did I?

You just don't get it. You're just too condescending. I also read here everyday, and have read your comments before. You seem to think you can criticize with impunity."

See what I did for you? Your as opposed to You're? A contraction of the words You and Are. As in, You are just too condescending. You see, "Your" implies possession of something. Pretty basic, really. Also, put a period in there between what seemed to be be one run-on sentence with any punctuation. And Immunity? WTF does immunity have to do with it. Like, I'm "immune" to disease? No, I think the word you wanted to use was the one I put in there for you. Impunity. It means I'm getting away with something.

Also, dude, when you post a story here (which, I see, you have NOT done), you have the option to allow comments. If you don't want comments (as some people occasionally don't want), you can opt to not allow comments. If you DO allow comments, you (if you were an author) would be indicating that you want people's honest opinions. There is not, unfortunately, an option to only allow rosy, positive comments. Like the way kids get an award not for winning something, but for just "participating". Nope, that option isn't there the last time I checked.

And once again, for the record (and if you doubt me, go back and read the original comment I made): I told the author that I felt his story was kind of short. "If you hear 'Too Short' enough times, will you get the idea?" And I pointed out that proof-reading it once or twice might have caught the grammatical mistakes they made.

I've got to laugh, at this point. How often does a story have fewer words than the comments it receives?

So, in closing, STFU, or don't. I honestly don't care. I'd have to value your opinion for it to affect MY opinion of what you have to say. Get it? Now THAT'S condescension!

(Oh, and you actually track my comments? Wow. What's THAT say about you?)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
A good story...

... requires certain elements be present. Among them are believable characters, a believable plot-line, consistency of action between characters that is consistent with the plot-situation, and as few errors in grammar, spelling, and punctuation as is possible.

The plot-line (Mom comforts jilted son, and it leads to incest) has been used quite a number of times before, with varying degrees of success. As used here, it bombs entirely, but that's due to the author's inability to fully imagine the scene and carry it forth in the narrative.

As for the believable characters, consistency of action, and being error-free, this story was sadly lacking.

Where, oh where, are the negative rating numbers?

petecopetecoabout 12 years ago
hit a nerve did I

You just don't get it your just to condescending. I also read here everyday and have read your comments before. You seem to think you can criticize with immunity ( not) phony baloney

bettyluvsitbettyluvsitabout 12 years ago
good one

i can relate very well to this one ,solife like and true nice love scene can not wait for more and yes she should have sucked his cock for him

Dimmu_BorgirDimmu_Borgirabout 12 years ago
MrPervy46

Your comment that "those who have never written a story have no right to criticize your story" is bullshit. You can't criticize a football game unless you played football. You can't criticize a music CD unless you play an instrument. You can't criticize a movie unless you've been an actor.

See how stupid that sounds? So was your stupid comment.

I get so sick of comments like that. It's a narrow-minded mindset. One can only heap loads of praise on submitted stories on here, huh? Bullshit.

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