Camping Trip

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Her ass was so tight that I didn’t last long. I pumped into her three times hard, while she flicked my fingers over her clit before I pulled out and spewed cum all over her back. Together we kept rubbing her pussy, but within seconds she too groaned and her entire body shivered as an orgasm wracked her body.

The next morning we packed up our camp and prepared to hike back down to the cars. We took some last pictures of the falls and our campsite, but neither of us would ever forget our time spent there. We hiked hand in hand for most of the way down the mountain and didn’t speak much. No words were necessary. The depth of the feelings we’d discovered for each other would last a lifetime.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

so so,,,

DrakeParkerSummersDrakeParkerSummersover 3 years ago

You really needed a beta or a spell check program.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

I was underwhelmed by this story. The “Romance” part of this story seemed more like a fait accompli. Just not the way I like a story to go, I like a little foreplay before getting too serious.

JPBVJPBVover 9 years ago
poor editing

Numerous times you write "cloths" instead of "clothes", as one example out if many.

Also, more character development would have helped

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Medium Velocity

This would have been an excellent story if you had an editor. Use "come" instead of "cum" and "through" instead of "thru." Perfect spelling and grammar focuses the reader on the story and not on the words. Good effort, keep posting! :)

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