Charlie's Novel

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"And you swept me off my feet! What a whirlwind courtship! We got married in Chapter 9. Then just as we were starting our honeymoon in Chapter 12 you had to rush off to Singapore in the middle of the night, and that's the way it's been going ever since. That darned old Charlie still owes us a honeymoon!"

Bruce emptied his glass and turned suddenly. "It just get darker outside! Do you think Charlie turned off his desk lamp?"

"Let's give him five minutes to get settled in bed and then we'll go out and play detective. You ought to go back to being Private Eye Will until we can figure out where things stand."

"Wait a minute. He won't know what he's going to write till he wakes up in the morning. For now, let's take advantage of a night off and recapture a little of that lost honeymoon. Come on, let's hit the bed!"

"Oh, my clear thinking hero, trust you to come up with the right thing to do! Last one naked has to get on the bottom! Run!"

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A_BierceA_Bierceover 4 years ago
The punch line

is that most of your readers probably think this is fantasy. Wait 'til they watch their story go roaring off to parts unknown in a brand-new 1934 Duesenberg Model J roadster driven by their main character who was born in 1994 and never learned to drive. And you don't have the faintest idea who the passenger is, but she's sure a classy dame.

northlandernorthlanderover 10 years ago
Love it

What a premise, characters that have a life beyond the written word. Must keep this in mind when I sit in front iof the keyboard. or when I wake up in the middle of the night and the plots just come rolling in. Full Marks for a new twist.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
^_^

Dude, I love your imagination!! The premise of the story is awesome - characters having lives outside their writers - and it's funny too. (you should write a chapter two with the 'honeymoon') Five stars! (if they had more, I'd give more....)

mel_pomenemel_pomeneover 10 years ago
What a marvellous story!

This was really quite superb - thank you for giving me the biggest smile of the week! I am not a writer, but if it's this much fun I shall just have to try it out.

Very good indeed - a mini-masterpiece, well worth every one of its five stars!

memorable_eventmemorable_eventover 10 years ago
I love it

I'm a writer also. Can I borrow some of these characters for a story I have under development? I won't need them too long and promise to lend you some of mine in the future.

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