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"I _did_ it!"
Her voice echoed in the valley.
"I got _fucked!_"
She whooped loud and threw her fists in the air. Her back muscles pumped up. "_I did it!_"
* * *
She and her boyfriend left one day later.
I only saw her one other time, more than a year later, at Yosemite. It was early morning, and I was exploring the area around the campsites. I followed a path down towards the river, came around a big boulder, and there she was.
She stood hip-deep in the river, naked, surrounded by strongly swirling water. Her hair was longer, down to mid-back, but I recognized the triangular shape of her back. The river flowed so forcefully she had to lean forward against the current to keep from being swept downstream.
"Hey!" I yelled.
She looked at me and her face lit up with recognition. A smile bloomed and she yelled, "Hey!" And she dunked her head completely under the water, her entire self submerged in the roaring cauldron of foam and for a moment I panicked, I thought the river had taken her. But then she burst back up and she lunged towards the bank.
She bounded out of the water and let out a whoop. Her whole naked body was covered with goose bumps. "I can't believe it's you!" she said. She ran towards me and jumped against me and hugged me. Her cold, wet body was a shock. And she laughed and stepped away. "I am here on my honeymoon," she said. "I can't wait to introduce you to my husband. I think you'll like him."
She dried off while I watched awkwardly, and she put on a long shirt. She held my hand and led me back to her campsite.
And she introduced me to her husband. And he was a very nice guy indeed.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 9 years agoOne of he best stories I've ever read on this site. Didn't expect to find one with this much depth, and still be hot and sexy. Keep up the good work!
sun_sea_skyover 11 years agoThat story brought back memories. Not of getting fucked on a climb, mind you. But the rest.
I gave it 5 stars, 95% was fantastic. The climbing, the romance, the sex, the boyfriend she didn't really like.
The last couple of paragraphs though made me wonder if you got bored with it. The husband was a "very nice guy". Is that all? What about the presumed affair? What about his disdain of her swearing? His disdain of her climbing ability? Their lack of sex? The story looked like it was heading down a different path.
Oh well, nice twist ending in that case. :)
Scotsman69about 13 years agoMuscles and litheness and mountains. This is writing of the highest quality, _apart_from_this_editing_crap.
Up there with David Craig and Joe Simpson in climbing writing terms, but with gorgeous realistic sex too. Brilliant.
Anonymousabout 13 years agodon't have time to leave a full review. congratulations on this piece. it was real and bittersweet, as the best stories are. too many posts are shallow and fill you up on meaningless plot details, but every word here is worth reading. are you a rock climber yourself? informative although can't say i got all the anatomy vocab! i really like how this was divided up- the sectioning gives you relief and keeps things interesting. bravo and continue to write more please!
Anonymousalmost 16 years agoi really enjoyed this story. being a climber, i found it refreshing to read a story that included my two favorite things! i thought the ending was a little awkward, but all and all,i thought it was pretty well done
