Her forehead rested against his damp chest as she tried to catch her breath, and she squirmed as she felt his fingers delve between her thighs to circle her pleasure nub as it played in the slippery valley.
"Please don't," she moaned, struggling weakly in his grasp as his fingers explored her. She gasped as she became aware the effect her wiggling had on him, a blush turning her cheeks a soft pink as she gazed up into his devilish green eyes. She abruptly stilled on top of him, and he chuckled at her dilemma as she was forced to accept the teasing caresses without moving. Soon she was unable to sit still, her hips arching involuntarily as his knowing fingers probed her, and she quickly realised her owner had no intention of ending her torment soon as he thickened inside of her.
To be continued...
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Well, I think the anon who claimed that the hymen is external is tryin to Anne a bad joke or to troll. I refuse to believe that someone is idiotic enough to think that. This is basic, middle school knowledge. I learned this in 6th grade. Either way, anyone over the age of 18 has to be living under a big ass rock if he/she thinks that.
On another note, the story is pretty interesting. I like the gold tipped nipple. The name Jolie is a bit obvious, though (French for "pretty"). I think some more thought into the name would make it even better. But generally, so far so good.more...
great story
thanks for this story, I'm really enjoying it, please keep writing, your stories turn me on so much
Wow
First, guys, who the heck cares, really?? This isn't a place to discuss that. You should be reviewing the story.
Second, this was really good. I don't like how he's treating her by doing that in front of all his men, but I also understand that right now she's only seen as a slave - an object. You have a very unique writing style and I really can't wait to read the next chapter. Overall, I am pleased with this work.more...
anatomy
http://www.netterimages.com/image/2949.htm
Actually, she's right.
External means outer. Internal means inner or inside. The hymen is INSIDE a vagina. If you are female you would know this. What do you people think a girl's cherry is???? Come on now, let's not go back to 8th grade! External!?!? Hell no! Lets use our brain people. You two people must be men. Typical.more...
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