- NonHuman
- Daybreak Ch. 15
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"What would she have wanted?"
"Furnish it for him, if it isn't already. Live in it. Fill with a family."
"And what do you want?"
He did not hesitate as he said, "To give her what she wanted."
Charisma nodded in agreement. "Do you think we're ready for that?" Though they decided to stay together, they'd come to no agreements about becoming a family. As far as she knew, Jameson wanted to stay as they were.
Jameson kissed her soft cheek to brush off her underlying question. "After what we've been through, we're ready for anything." When he told her that he'd never leave, he meant it. He'd finally found what he'd been looking for and he wasn't going to let anyone take it away from him. Never again.
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And that concludes this edition of The Brethren series. I know it didn't end on the happiest of notes (don't hate me too much now), but I hope you guys vote and comment anyway. Thanks for the support and comments!
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 2 years agoOkay so I haven't read any of your other stories, so I'm basing this on just this story.
The premise was good, most characters were solid, written well but.. Nadia ruined it. Saying that visions of the future are unchangeable creates an unending paradox that eliminates any agency from the characters.
It didn't matter how well the characters were written, what they though, what they chose, Nadia washed it all away like a biblical flood. It makes everything feel hollow and empty. While she seemed like a nice character, I'm relieved she's dead if you're thinking of sequels. Involving time in any capacity with these stories ruins momentum.
It's similar to jaz_cullen(I think?) Stories, where all these super powerful men are wrapped around some super special woman's finger and every action is dictated by what she says, it leaves every other character devoid of depth.
Overall a fun read, but fell flat in the second half for me.
Anonymousover 6 years agoAn awesome story, that drew me in, I had to complete this saga before I lay my head down and dream the fight on.
Anonymousabout 11 years agoI am so fucking livid right now!!! You fucking kill Nadia and banish the asshole to another realm or something! And after all the shit they've been through? Why didn't charisma steal all of the powers from the demon and transfer it to someone? She didn't have to obey him!
Effin pissed ...
Anonymousabout 11 years agoAs upsetting as it is that Nadia died and left Andre...I believe it gives the story a more realistic plot. Life isn't a fairytale, things happen and overall I thoroughly enjoyed the plot and characters.
