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She continued lying on her back, catching her breath. "Yeah, I'm pretty beat too."
The clock on the wall said three minutes.
"You'd better cover yourself," Dave cautioned.
"I don't think there's any way to cover this," she replied, indicating her come-smeared chest.
"Well, cheer up. Maybe Great Chthulu rose from the depths while we were in here, and a few suspicious stains will be the least of your worries." He leaned across the aisle, plucked her wadded shirt off the bench, and tossed it to her. It un-wadded itself in midair, causing her catch to appear awkward.
"Don't joke about that," she chastised him, sitting up to dress.
"You mean to tell me that after two successive orgasms, you're still not completely relaxed?"
She winked. "I told you, it's a constant fear."
Dave leaned back against the wall. "Okay, how about this? I'll give you my number before I go, so whenever the fear gets out of hand, you just call me up and talk dirty to me."
The front of her shirt was riddled with damp splotches by this point, as if someone had momentarily turned a hose on her. Without breaking character, she shook it vigorously to dry it and said, "I imagine that would help me out a lot."
- COMMENTS
GigiBrevardover 13 years agoAuthor...that I was taking a bit of creative license with the Halloween theme. I thought spooky noises, the subtle idea of a monster without ever really seeing it, the classic image of the scared woman seeking out a dude's arms just like at the old drive-in horror movie... y'know. As for steampunk, perhaps it's just the way I picture the interior of the chamber. Lovecraft, however, is mentioned by name, so I'm afraid I don't understand that comment. Thanks for visiting, for your compliment about it being a hot story, and for adding your voice to the convo :)
Anonymousover 13 years agoWhile it is admittedly a hot story, I don't see how this relates to Halloween at all, or steampunk, for that matter. You mention H.P. Lovecraft, but was there even a squid or anomaly?
Anonymousover 13 years agoOh man, this story got me going. This is one of the most original and best-written stories on the site. Normally passages about teasing aren't well-written enough to do anything for me, but in this story they were excruciating.
The environment and setup were original and not contrived, and the story was sexy all the way through without simply being a story about two random people having sex. I want to see both of these characters back in another story, and I want to see you keep writing!
kuellarover 13 years agoWonderfully written, and very hot. Very clever, I think, the way you used the environment of the decompression chamber -with the uncertainly of what's happening outside, and the certainty of what's going to happen inside (with a little Lovecraftian push to get things started).
I do agree that Dave, in his line of work, is sure to have many similar adventures - and I for one would look forward to reading them.
Good luck in the contest!
GigiBrevardover 13 years agoAuthor...that Dave will end up a recurring character. Too many cool situations he can get himself into. But no, we probably won't see Shannon or the squid again. What specifically doesn't hang together? I'd like to fix it if I can. Thanks for the comment.
