Den of the Old God

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Laura looked back on her former friends, her eyes blazing for a moment as she imparted commands on their malleable minds. The two stopped kissing immediately, and immediately set about putting their clothes back on, eager to spread their blessings and embark on their new purpose in life.

All three worked their way down the peak. The mountain had changed them forever, and soon they would return the favor, changing the world forever.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
A very minor glitch in a very good story

These characters _really_ sound like Americans, so how could the Romans have dealt with this god? This threw me quite a bit.

Kingmaker711Kingmaker711about 11 years agoAuthor
Unlikely

Glad you like it, but no, I have no sequel planned, my itch has been scratched concerning this. Though for all my stories I leave the endings open ended enough so I can come back if I wanted to, so you never know.

Thanks for the comment!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Awesome

Well-done. Is there a part two?

Kingmaker711Kingmaker711about 11 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

That's been a bad habit of mine forever. I have resubmitted the story with proper its/it's usage. Hopefully it will be up soon. Thanks for the comment!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
It's got its good points, but...

A promising story; it's just that I couldn't read past its first couple of paragraphs. Why? "It's" means "it is". "Its" means "belonging to it". This was just too painful.

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