So here we are; the final countdown, the closing credits, the end of the road. The post-orgasmic collapse. It's been an emotional journey and I feel like we've really grown together, you know? Sob, sigh...I'm so proud of you!
Now that I've finished patronising you: I hope this has been of use. I'd love to hear thoughts, ideas and even corrections on this little piece. Just don't send me pictures of your mushroom cock, ok? I get like three of those a week and always when I'm eating a sausage.
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Really enjoyed reading your post, thanks!
shit!
totally just sent you a picture of my mushroom cock
Guilty as charged.
I'm guilty of quite a few of these problems and I think Firebrain has opened my eyes. Thanks
Gotta love people who are willing to help others learn.
I know I do. (And with this, I add another thing to my list of favorite 'stories')
Just realized how my example could be taken.
I in no way, shape, or form meant to insult your intellect Firebrain/Lucy (in fact, I've been reading some of your blog entries since I found this a couple of hours ago).
To all of those who read this comment but haven't given her blog a look; you should. For those that do read this comment and have read her blog; you know what I'm talking about.
Thanks again for your contributions to the literary world. I find all of your "advice" and "how-to" articles intelligent, informative and humorous. You've made me aware of the potential pit-fall that is "Mary Sue."more...
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