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"You could always move?" Then he added, "On second thought, I never liked you very much anyway."
I stuck my tongue out and he chuckled.
Time had come for us to pick up and take the long drive back. The kids complained, they wanted to stay longer, this was fun. I heard Amy ask her mom, "Can we come back here with daddy?"
"Maybe. Maybe sometime."
I wanted to cry for Claire and her kids. That husband of hers gave her the shaft and doesn't know what he's missing. If he were here, I'd slap him silly for being such a jerk.
The drive back went smoothly, and all the children took naps in the car, and were rearing to go once we drove into Gene's driveway. I was helping undo seatbelts and lifting little bodies out, Gene stops and watches a police officer exit from his cruiser and walk towards the house. Must be checking on someone in the neighborhood, I figure. The lunch box, toys and other items are carried into the house and I took time to help Aaron and Amy change into some clean clothes. Claire was busy changing Andrew's diaper, Gene walked into the room.
"Claire, the office wants to talk to you."
"SHIT." The expletive exploded from her mouth, she handed me Andrew after I'd gotten the others changed. "They're going to take my kids away."
- COMMENTS
bruce22over 8 years agoThe twists and turns leave unable to even project though I do imagine they will end up forming a family. As he says he will never be able to devote enough time as he would like to them...
0649dover 13 years agoYou're not being too explicit and pushy about your beliefs, but I can understand why you would want to ... at least you're not being too holier-than-thou (as of yet). Anyway, it's down to you as an author and so far you're doing a good job. Your story is quite enjoyable!
peteinchicagoabout 14 years agoand an enjoyable read. The only issue I have with it is all the bible thumping. People can do things because they are good people and its the right thing to do without wasting time praying to a hypothetical diety. Still, its an enjoyable read.
Anonymousabout 19 years agoI just love it!
Can't wait for more... Can't stop hoping for 'happily ever-after' too!
