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Without a word, he climbed into the car and started the engine. Emma was privately relieved. If he was going to spend most of his time ignoring her, she thought she might be able to cope. She smelt the food and realised how hungry she was. She hadn't eaten since the morning, and already the sun was starting to set. Emma glanced nervously at the man, but she was no longer with James and William, and no-one had told her that their rules would still apply. She reached out to the food and started to eat it with her hands. She was comforted when he didn't tell her to stop.
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At the auction house, James and William were counting their money, pleased with the day's work. Another man pushed the door open and entered with a smile. He appeared charming and attractive; the kind of man that might be able to tempt a girl to infidelity. They turned and greeted him warmly, and William handed him some money. "There's your share," he said genially. "Feel free to count it."
The man nodded and sat down to check his pile of cash. "We did well," he said, sounding pleased.
"Yes, and next time you can do more to earn it," James said. "You've been the catalyst twice in a row now. It's your turn to take part in the training."
"Fair enough," the man said comfortably. "I've got my eye on someone, anyway. She's quiet, unassuming, pretty; exactly the kind of girl that will be easy to break. You'll like her," he told William. "She's got a great arse."
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoI really liked your story, and I hope there is more to it... I want to know more... Who was she sold to? What is happening now?
I do agree with some other posters that it falls better under non-consent/reluctance, but regardless, I still really liked it... Good job on your writing!
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoI agree that this story is in the wrong catefory; it really belongs under non-consent/reluctance. If I'm looking for a story like this one, that's where I go. I was disappointed. So where is her Forgiveness? Unless there is another chapter coming that sets things right, then the story is a lie. It kept my attention, only in waiting for her to get what she "earned"; what she was promised, which is usally what you see in stories under the BDSM category, because they imply consent by all characters involved. Of course, I quickly realized that there was no forgiveness and I wondered if she would just be thrown out after 30 days, There is actually another story "14 Days to Redemprion" that is what this story claimed to be but wasn't. A more accurate tilte would have been "Tricked, Trapped and Sold". That said, keep trying. Your writing isn't bad, but no one likes to be lied to.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoIt would probably help if the story hadn't been deliberately presented as something other than it was in order to mislead the reader and give the ending more dramatic impact. It is categorized as BDSM with insinuation that the female lead, Emma, is simply atoning for her wrongdoing by submitting to her husband. There is no BDSM here other than the sadism element, and the category falls blatantly into Non-con and Fetish with its theme of malicious character destruction as a form of 'erotica' and subjugation by means of emotional blackmail and use of scat and piss as pleasure points.
The characters are so deliberately and maliciously nasty, their victim so ridiculously stupid (seriously, a legally enforceable slave contract? that doesn't even make sense and should embarrass the author to use), and the plot so reliant on deceiving the reader with non-story devices, that it's impossible to like Earning Forgiveness unless you get off on the very things that the story wasn't supposed to be about in the first place.
You get that this isn't BDSM, right? She is subjugated by force, not submissive by choice. There is no act of dominance, the devices used to "dominate" are typical non-con blackmail and slave contracts. The supposed bondage and discipline are nothing more than humiliation and degradation. She is not trained to be or do anything, she is just mistreated repeatedly and then sold off into a questionable slavery that any "owner" would have to be a complete idiot to agree to.
So yeah, the surprise that people might take issue with this story when it is presented as something other than it really is shouldn't be a surprise at all.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoIt's funny how people judge what they don't like we're all so visous behind anonymous, yes the author is saying all women are stupid and that's exactly how to treat all women ,,, great call , grow up .... it's called fantasy for a reason if you can't let your darker self out in a story well where can you ... Nice ending twist interesting journey .. Dark but enjoyable
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoThis was really good. And the comment above kind of scares me... Like wtf was with that comment?
But anyways I'm a girl and I really liked this. Though the ending was like OH WOW. Wowowowow. So good.
