Fallen Ch. 11

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Nephylim
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"Well then... now that we have that straightened out, can we please eat dinner?"

"I've had enough... and I'm certain that... Bridge? has. Where does he sleep? I'll take him to bed and wait with him, until someone comes."

"He's not that fragile, Star, he's a lot stronger than he looks."

"I don't care. I... I want to..."

"Don't forget..." I say sternly, "he is not yours. You cannot take him unless he invites you."

Star looks at me, as if he despises me then gets to his feet, Bridge still in his arms and sweeps away.

"Do you think Bridge is right?" Sacha asks thoughtfully, as he watches them go.

"About what?"

"About Star being afraid."

"I'm sure of it. But that's not all. He's angry too; angry that he allowed himself to be taken and angry that he enjoyed it."

Sacha chuckles. "I can see why you love him. It is easy to love him. He's like Bridge, but in a different way."

I smile. "Oh, a very different way."

"Are you sure you want me to stay with him? He... he makes me feel... I'm overwhelmed by him."

"He is part of our lives now, Sacha and I have a feeling that nothing is ever going to be quite the same again."

"I think you're right."

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nuckin1futsnixnuckin1futsnixabout 11 years ago
ha!!!

im sooooo happy that star is so badass and he refuses to meekly hand himself over to luma write on!!!!!!

dinkybootsdinkybootsalmost 12 years ago

now this is getting bloody good...... i think you have to many people in this . however some of my earlier comments were a little harsh however this last peice was breath taking.

4catsrmine4catsrmineabout 12 years ago

I have thoroughly enjoyed this story. There is an intensity that drew me in, especially with Luma. I love all of your characters, and am hoping you will continue with this wonderful adventure.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!

It is simply complex. I grows with each chapter and I cannot wait to find out where it will go and just whom will all this undying love bring forth. Hidden strengths, fears, love?! Thank you for this. It's interesting that the title is Fallen, because everyone is falling or growing to understanding, love and acceptance. All the things that everyone struggles with in real life. The HOTTTT sex scenes also show growth or trust and even surprise in the intensity. Wow, just wow. I did not know what to expect when I started this story, but damn am I GLAD I found you. Keep up the great work. Your imagination is AMAZING!!!!

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