- Romance
- Firsts Ch. 05
- Page 3
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Click hereShe was right. Regardless of her motives, everything she said about Gabriel was the truth. From the start, our 'romantic' relationship had been purely physical. I may have feelings for him, but for Gabriel I was just another one of his fuck buddies. That's what I had agreed to. I knew the kind of guy he was when I got involved with him, but for some reason it was just occurring to me what that really meant.
One day, he'd get bored with me, just like all the others, and he'd move on. Becca, someone else, that didn't matter; either way, my heart would be braking. Because somewhere along the line, my silly little crush on Gabriel had grown into full-blown love.
I loved him.
At the same moment, I knew that what Becca had said didn't matter. Even if I was only a passing fancy for him, I'd take what ever I could get, and deal with the fallout later.
Because I loved him.
- COMMENTS
PhotoMeisteralmost 6 years agoWhen she said her heart would be 'braking', was that a reference to Gabriel working at an auto shop? LOL
Anonymousabout 12 years ago2/5. That is all it deserve.
At this position I can say that what ever has been built up till this chapter went to trash.
You clearly depicted Gabe as a PLAYER and Kes as some horny teenager.
It isn't a crush because it doesn't justify the situation.
They are FRIENDS WITH BENEFITS, that is all I can say and the reason for my disappointment is you presented them as if they are nurturing a sacred love within.
Sorry but you literally wasted yourself at the edge trying to portray a sex-flick story.
-- JoKeR_JcK
Anonymousover 13 years agoUnfortunately, the lack of a good proofread and correct grammar sometimes interferes with true appreciation of an excellent story.
de Jay
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Anonymousover 15 years agoGreat story. Really likable characters. It is funny to be reading about characters who appear to be in the U.S. (but maybe Canada?), with our cultural mix and vernacular, yet with British spelling! But no biggy. I love this story and hope you keep writing!
Anonymousalmost 16 years agoLove it!! the long wait between chapters is killing me. This story has it all. Keep up the pen.
