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Sam kissed her back, and knew that he would never see Earth Day the same way again.
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Please take a second to vote, and feel free to drop me a line in a public comment or an email to let me know how you liked the story. Don't hesitate to point out anywhere that I messed up, either. I don't use an editor, so things can (and do) slip through.
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Anonymousover 6 years agoI think you may be a erotic writing savant. I thuroughly enjoyed this as well as other stories yiu have produced. I applaud your use of editors as I bennefitted greatly in graduate school from a good editor. Keep up the great work.
RejectRealityover 6 years agoAuthorTo the earlier comment: This one was written before I had an editor. Or rather, it was written before I started passing the stories in this name on to the editor who worked with me in my other two pen names.
There are quite a few of my earlier stories that will have - shall we say - questionable grammar. Most of it will likely be real words used improperly, because everything was run through multiple passes of spell-checking, but they will be there.
Of course, one of my most recent, which went through the full editing gamut still escaped with a character's name changing halfway through the story. LOL
I'll try to remember to put in an edit to fix this one when I have some down time. Glad you enjoyed it :)
Prinzmettleover 6 years agoOn behalf of my fellow geeks, thank you. Oh, and don't worry about length; you're good. As long as you keep up your excellent style, going long just makes it more enjoyable. And did I mention the quality of your writing, not to mention spelling: very good. It's what gets you the many 5s.
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One spelling issue: In the sentence "Oh god, I'm defiantly not complaining.", I suspect that you meant "definitely", not "defiantly", as in "for sure" vs. "I'll fight you if you argue". Although you might mean the latter! ;-) I mention this because you have used this word in several stories.
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoLoved your story. Great writing with suspense, hot sex and real characters wou are loving. Please write more!
Anonymousover 13 years agoNice idea; nice story. I enjoy your writing -- particularly the lack of annoying typos and so forth. Good descriptions. Thanks.
