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- Grey Ch. 02
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"I'm not, I wasn't-" I began without thinking. I couldn't finish. I couldn't tell another lie. I could only stare at her wide-eyed and accept the knowing in her eyes. I felt Grey kiss the top of my head. I took a deep breath through my nose, and let it out my mouth, I would survive. One thing at a time.
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Luckily in an hour the mixture was finished and there hadn't been any more embarrassing topics. We put the big clay bowl in a corner on the counter and set a timer. Grey took my hand and we headed to shower, finally. We went together, but were 'good', simply enjoying the hot water and steam together, helping scrub the hard to reach places. It was soothing and I felt overwhelmingly loved. When we finished we settled into a couch in the main sitting room. It was nice to just sit. I felt almost normal. Gradually the rest of the family began to filter in. I wasn't quite as embarrassed to see them as I was clean, but I still felt a familiar heat in my cheeks.
It was a quiet evening. I had always slipped away soon after dinner, so I hadn't seen how nice Grey's family was. I had been too busy resenting being pulled from my old life to see the gentle acceptance of everyone here. No one teased, well, not with malicious intent. Everyone was so open. Somehow after a few hours stories of Grey as a child began to be told. I found myself giggling into Grey's shoulder and chest as a picture of a solemn but feisty child formed in my mind. When the timer rang I had no idea it had been 6 hours.
Grey grabbed my hand and the bowl from the kitchen, and then pulled me up to the bedroom. I realized I didn't know what we were supposed to do with the mixture. I stood in the middle of the room and twisted my hands. I really didn't want to eat it.
"Don't worry." Grey seemed to read my mind. "It's like a lotion." Oh no. That could be even worse.
"Does it go all over?" Grey nodded. He stepped toward me and began to pull off my shirt.
As soon as the mixture was all over my body the itch I hadn't even noticed began to fade. I stood like a scarecrow while Grey tried not to laugh. I thought again how long of a day it had been, and began to laugh too. Who knew what could happen in just 24 hours. As the itch faded into nothing I realized I still wanted Grey. I wanted to wake up in his arms. I wanted- I made myself think the words- to have sex with him, again, all the time. I wanted to learn about his family, I wanted to hear more stories about when he was a baby. I wanted to tell him about me. As my laughter faded I looked in his eyes, and voiced a sentiment I had never imagined with Grey, or anyone.
"You know. I think I could love you." The look on his face was worth every moment of pain and awkwardness, and his response would live in my heart forever.
"I think I already love you."
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 6 years agoI hope you are still out there somewhere writing. I come back from time to time and read your stories all over again. This one is my favorite. You're a very good writer.
canndover 8 years agogood story. I'd have liked to see a prologue about his being pulled from his old life and where was the place or how did they get there? Aside from that...good story. though I coulda done without the dog getting hurt in the first chapter :/
Delaneymegalmost 12 years agoI thought I missed the beginning of the story. That maybe I had to read another story to know what is going on in this one. Where are they? What are they?
jeansguyalmost 12 years agoYou have what appears to be the beginning of a good story but at this point...NOT! There are way too many loose ends that need brought together. Who is Carol and what is her part? Unicorn bulls...why??? Where does this take place? Why was Alex abducted from his home to be Grey's lover? husband? what?? What part does Trixie play in this? I have not rated this story because I don't know where it is going. If you end here I could only rate it a 1. I think you have talent, don't let this story die here.
Also, you really need a proofreader or editor. There are alot of errors in these two chapters that make the reader struggle to understand what you meant to write. I fully understand an author is not really affective in proofreading their work. I learned many years ago I could not so I always have someone proofread important documents.
Hang in there and learn, grow, and improve!
EMArnoldalmost 12 years agoAs a short story, this could use a lot more tightening up. I understand as a writer that you want the reader to "fill in the blanks" if you will, but without any sort of frame of reference all of the threads that have been presented over these two chapters leaves more questions then answers, and no way to form any sort of conclusions.
Also, I'm still unsure why this story is entitled "Grey" when really he plays a secondary role to Alex. Maybe we were supposed to learn about him through the eyes of Alex, but this character is so caught up in his own drama that all I'm walking away with about Grey is that he is long suffering, super patient, and possibly a great lover.
There are the bones for a good story here, but right now I'm not feeling satisfied as a reader.
