Handsome Ch. 14

Although the story is mostly well written it is a bit sketchy on sticking to the facts of the story. It also comes across as a little like snap shots rather then continuous. Personally I find I do not like the main character at all. He is a very selfish and self centered person and treats the women like a disposable diaper. He ends up coming across as the definition of the stereo typical only worried about himself male that every woman complains about. It makes it hard to believe that these women then recommend him to their friends. If you want it to be believable make him more caring and dominant rather then just another jerk

You have Lynn and Aubrey at the movies, walking to the bus (the car is in the shop), and then - they're in the car, screwing .... hmmmmm. Other than that, keep the series going!