Homecoming

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Linda gets together with old friend Danielle.
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Danielle was shocked when I told her that I was a lesbian.

I'd come back to my hometown, to settle my dad's estate after he died.

She was my closest friend, until I left for the big city and a career in publishing. I called her before the trip, about getting together.

Now we were in my room at the Star Motel, reminiscing about the "old days" when I told her about my sex life.

"I can't believe you're a lesbian, Linda" she said. "How did that happen?"

"It was easy. I think I always had a leaning in that direction."

"I never noticed."

"Hey, no big deal. What's been happening with you? Last I heard you were engaged to Tom what's his name?"

"We were married for three years, then he found a bitch who was better in bed!"

"That's a shame," I said. "Some guys are pricks!"

We got a bottle of Scotch at the liquor store across the road from the motel and brought it back. We weren't sleepy and wanted to keep talking. It seemed natural to hold her hand as we crossed the road.

When we got back to the room, I kissed her lightly on her lips and said, "Forget Tom. Life goes on."

When I kissed her, Danielle hesitated, then kissed me back.

"Let's drink to life," she said. "Open the bottle, and pour us a few drinks."

I sat at the table in the room, and she got comfortable on the bed as we drank Scotch and compared notes about what had happened since we last saw each other.

Finally, after two o'clock in the morning, I asked her if she wanted to go back home.

"Can I stay here?" she asked. "There's nothing to do at home."

I looked at her, spread out on the couch, with her skirt way up, and her legs exposed. "There's something here for you, honey."

She caught my meaning. "I'd love to see what you have for me."

I couldn't believe what she was saying!

I'd never intended making out with her, and she seemed to be inviting me to have sex. Did she mean it, or was it just the booze talking?

"Let's get serious," I said. "I want you so bad I can taste it. If you stay, I'm going to lick your breasts and suck on your nipples. Then, I'm going to eat your pussy. Have you ever been eaten by another woman?"

"No," she said. "But there's a first time for every thing. Everybody seems to talk about oral sex, but I've never tried it."

I lay down on the bed, next to her, and kissed her on the mouth. She moaned just a bit. Then I kissed her throat; she hesitated, then kissed my nipples, which were visible under my blouse. I hadn't worn a bra that day, maybe in anticipation of our meeting.

"Take off your skirt and panties," I said, "I'm so horny that I'm going to eat your pussy. What do you think of that?"

In a low voice she said, "Sounds good to me. What took you so long to get around to my cunt?"

We lay down next to each other on the bed, with my head on her crotch, and her head on mine.

I'd hoped for hot sex with her, but was still surprised that she was into my favorite way of having sex. As I explored her cunt with my tongue, she moaned.

"Its your turn" I whispered into her ear, kissing and nibbling her earlobe, then I pulled her head down to my crotch.

After thirty minutes of oral sex (more or less, but I wasn't keeping track of time), she asked a question:

"Was I as good as your lover in New York?"

"You were great," I said, "and I don't have lover waiting for me to get back."

That was the beginning of a very hot week, while I finished the paper work for my dad's estate.

In bed with her, I broke the news, "I have to get back to New York. My boss gave me time to come here, but I'm finished."

We made passionate love that night, until the sun rose. As I packed for the trip, she asked, "Can you put me up in New York? There's nothing here for me."

She moved in with me and is looking for a job in New York. In the meantime, I show her around New York, and we have sex as often as possible.

Life doesn't get much better.

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ticketybooticketybooalmost 17 years ago
Sweet

Lovely story as I love the thought of two women making out. It could however been more sensual as I know for a fact having witnessed my wife with another woman how erotic and sensual two women together is.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
What a mindless comment from 'Anonymous'

What's the matter with 2, 3, and 4? Is he allergic to these numbers? Does he see nothing at all between crap and excellence? No degrees or graduation of merit? So the story isn't good enough for a 5, but why? Criticism which offers nothing constructive, and demonstrates a total lack of reason, is about as meaningless as saying that Tuesday is different from a Beethoven symphony. Four is different from five, but there's a reason for that, and no benefit to anyone in assuming four doesn't exist! I agree that the story doesn't merit a 5. The story is too short to establish the pace realistically. The events at the beginning - the 'conversion' of Danielle - unfold all too quickly. When Linda mentions 'There's something here for you', Danielle says 'What took you so long?'. They had, it is true, sat together chatting about each other's sexual activities for a long time. But the moment between the long talk and the idea becoming interpersonal with each other, was just a flicker, and suddenly we have Linda delivering oral sex. This sexual activity is too skimpily detailed to 'raise a stand' even though we are told that it lasts for hours and goes on for a week. Well, the sex in a story doesn't have to be detailed if the intention is not erotic or pornographic or sexy in some way, but if there is no detail in that aspect, it must be because it isn't important, isn't the point of the story, but just the peg on which the story is hung. So the story must be about something else - say, character development. None of the events have any effect on Linda's character. Danielle's character changes, but that part too lacks a continuum. We have Danielle a non-lesbian at the start of Linda's sojourn, becoming one on the first night, and by the end of the week declaring she wants to give up everything [though she says there's nothing] to go and live for ever in another city with her friend, presumably happily ever after.

Lesly, your story reads, to me, like a collection of notes which have the potential to be worked into a longer and deeper tale. I hope you give that a try, experience and experiment with plot-building, characterisation and story construction. It would be good practice to try it with something you have already 'completed', but not satisfactorily - so that it becomes a habit whenever you write.

Best wishes, Freddy in Brazil

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
I didn't submit a vote above because I only ------

give either of two scores there-------Either a 1 or a 5----This story could have been a 5 but was not well enough done for that score.

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