Hotel Room Fun

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tonyatll
tonyatll
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Once she Martina had done this I placed my hands either side of her head and started slowly sliding my hips forward and backwards along her body, causing her cock to slide out and in my arse as my cock slid in and out of her lips. As I got in the swing of fucking myself with her long cock and fucking her mouth at the same time I started slowly to speed up.

It was a bit frustrating to me that my thick 6 inch cock stopped me enjoying being fucked by the full length of Martina's cock as my balls would hit her chin when I was only three quarters of the way up her long throbbing cock.

It didn't matter though as I was still enjoying the full feeling of being fucked and was now going as fast as I could as I could feel my balls tightening ready for my orgasm. At that moment Martina started groaning around my leaking cock and I felt her cock pulsing as a sudden wet warmth flooded my arse.

That did it; I came explosively in her mouth, pumping several strong jets of hot cum in her mouth, which she tried valiantly to swallow. But there was so much, some leaked out of the corners of her mouth and trickled over the smudged lipstick before going down her chin.

I collapsed totally satisfied on top of Martina, with her cock still buried deep in my full arse. Sometime later Martina woke me and said "its nearly 2am you better get cleaned up and go!"

"Strewth, sorry I have to run" I replied. And as I went to get off of Martina I realised her limp, spent cock was still in my arse. I slid forward till with a "plop" her cock slid out and released a steady stream of cum from my arse, which dripped down all over her cock and shaved balls.

"Sorry" I said as I handed her some tissues and dived to the bathroom and quickly cleaned myself up before dressing and saying "goodbye" to Martina before leaving.

I am now waiting to hear when she is CUMMING here again from Spain for our next session.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Hard read

The passion of this submission is unmistakable, as is its need for editing. There is not a clear "voice" through which this tale of passion and suission is told. I understood the desire to have a surprising "switch" in which the reader is to suddenly become aware of the sex and roles of the players. Properly edited this would be an amazing chronicle of men submitting to fetishes, desires and true selves. I look forward to reading that version of this diamond in the ruff. There is a talent or flair working in the writing of this. There just needs to be some restrained discipline in the telling. Otherwise the "miscues" become both unfortunate and distracting.

cdCindy1cdCindy1about 7 years ago
fix the grammar

It's a good story but confusing because of the switch between 1st and 3rd persons and the confusion of the names, etc.. Clean it up grammatically and it would be a fantastic story.

amylin456amylin456over 12 years ago

very well written. enjoyed the detail -- and of course the subject !

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Confusing narrative...

Hard to figure out who is doing what. First person narrative quickly switches to third person. To make it even more confusing you have Martin and Martina! I don't think you as the author can even track of eack character's seperate narrrative sometimes. You fix these things and the story will be much more enjoyable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
good story

It is first person in parts and third person in other parts. Very confusing.

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