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I had reached the shore when the Wilijies came up to Alexander. "The other way!" he yelled as he fended off blows, soon striking down the two first Wilijies. I noticed the helmet gleaming in the sun. I recognized this... I knew this... My premonition! This was my premonition, where I saw Alexander on his stallion, fighting Wilijies.
While I reflected over my memories the Wilijies had Alexander down from his horse and kneeling.
"So kill me. Just let Amram live", he pleaded.
The most vicious looking Wiliji brought his sword up to Alexander's throat. "I say we take the girl and kill you anyway", he said with a sneer.
"No!" I said before thinking. I had the attention of them all. Now was the time when I felt the little chill over my body. "Don't kill him!"
"Is he your lover boy? Isn't one king enough?" he laughed. "Got to have two kings as lovers... hmmph, human", he spat on the ground before Alexander.
"We're just here to get the girl", said one of the others. He tried to point the tip of the other guy's sword elsewhere. "We can't kill him."
"Aw, spoilsport. No king: no war to finance, isn't that right?" (I'm not sure what you mean by finance... finance what? Do you mean to pay a ransom?
"I've got a cousin somewhere who'll be willing to finance if I die", Alexander diverted.
"Shut up!"
"We've got to go now, before someone comes looking for him..."
The 'nice' Wiliji took a step toward me and picked up my dress from the ground. "Get dressed", he growled, throwing the dress at me.
I quickly pulled on the dress, trying to ignore Alexander, who was looking at me.
"Now, your majesty", the foul one said. "Tell prince Vicdaen that we've got his lady. If he wants her back, he'd better come get her." With that he punched the hilt of his sword in Alexander's neck. His eyes went upwards, and the rest of him went down.
"No!"
"Shut your mouth, or he's finished."
I tensed, but stayed quiet. 'Just go with them', I thought. 'It will be alright.'
Hopefully it would.
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For this chapter I would like to say thank you too: Bob Inskeep, for giving back my imagination and enthusiasm. I wrote the tenth chapter just for you!
My editor StuckInMyCorner for a wonderful job on this chapter.
My little sister, for being so indulgent towards me. Love you!
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 17 years agoMy literotica account is so screwed up that I'm about to cry... No, not really, I never liked Literotica much anyway. I've forgotten to do this but... Now I'm doing it.
Literotica is fucked up, so you who are looking for my stories will have to read them at some other place, like SOL (storiesonline.net) or AFF (adultfanfiction.net - in the original part, or just search for my name - which is the same there as on lit... nothing compares to being consistent)
And oh by the way, I've gotten a new blog - much better - and a new mail as well: Jane.shield@hotmail.com
Anyone who'd like to add me at MSN is welcome to do so. I'm so lonely :s.... No, not really. Perhaps, a bit... teeny tad.
This was Jane Shield, over and out!
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoLoved your story. Thank you. Keep up the good work! Looking forward to the next instalment!!
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoWow,
I just found your story and had to read all of it straight through. You totally captivated me with your writing and I do hope you will continue.
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoi know how difficult it is to write, but you're doing a great job, just keep going. eveyr idea that you get, put it on paper, worry about fixing it later on, but get it on paper first. if you let your ideas flow you'll do a greart job. you have a fantastic imagination and you create great characters people love. thank you and please continue.
