If Your Heart Surrenders

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Marlene deflated, "Al, I'm sorry! I shouldn't have pushed you so hard."

Al took Marlene into his arms, "Marlene, I wasn't there for you, there's no need to apologize. But next time, if you'll forgive me for going and doing what I had to do; use a little of this?"

Marlene nodded and looked up gratefully, "I have some lube in my bags. I didn't really expect to use it on YOU. I never dreamed that I'd get to wear this outfit for YOU, but I suppose that_ Um, Henry and Charlie sent us another bottle of champagne_"

Al just cuddled Marlene warmly and smiled, "Look Marlene, I told you before that I have been with other women before and I suppose that I never really stopped to try to figure out why I never stayed with one of them. I suppose that I have always been too busy saving the world, or keeping my guys working, to see the truth. I was too busy to stop and think about what I really wanted for myself. I didn't start seeing it, until I saw you and realized some of what you have been through. I did that just today, because of you smiling, standing in a hot tub, holding a cold beer, waiting for me to come back in."

Marlene's eyes started to tear up as she interrupted: "I didn't mean to push you! I just; Al, I just; ever since we met back in school, I, I ah,"

Al waited as Marlene's courage gave out on her. Then he kissed her softly.

"Marlene?"

"Yes Al?"

"Shut-up and let me finish?"

Marlene smiled pathetically and swallowed hard as she braced herself for the worst.

"Earlier today, Henry pointed out a few pretty obvious things to me and then tonight he asked me if I had made it home from the war or not. If I had answered him then, I would have had to admit that: the absolute truth of it is I never really understood what home was for me.

Well, I realize now that 'home,' for me, has always been YOU.

So, I've decided to turn my apartment back into an office, and to run my business from there. After this job, the guys can start taking care of themselves.

I don't know anything about being gay or, straight or, whatever; I only know that I am ME. And I am happy and proud that I have the chance to be with YOU right now; despite how sore my ass is!"

Marlene smiled and fretted, "Oh Al!"

Al tapped the end of Marlene's nose affectionately, "I will need a place to live though?"

Marlene jumped on the opportunity, "You can move in with me! You practically live there already!"

Al agreed, "Yes, that was one of the things that Henry pointed out to me today."

Marlene tried to keep from smiling too broadly, "So um, what do you want to do for the rest of the night? Do you want for me to show you how to suck my dick? Or, maybe you don't like the fact that I never had the nerve to get rid of my dick.

Um, maybe you'd like to use some of MY lube_ REALLY Al; I have much better lube than this! I can tuck my dick and my balls away so that you won't even have to see them!

I'll have to finally work up the nerve to schedule that operation, but you can pretend until after I can turn myself into a_"

Al cupped Marlene's chin, "Marlene? Would you PLEASE shut-up for now? Just nod or shake your head, alright?"

Marlene nodded her head.

"Marlene, do you WANT to get this operation for yourself?"

Marlene shook her head.

"Then if it ain't broke, don't fix it just to please me. Be who and what you really are. So far, I've been finding YOU to be everything that I want!"

Marlene slipped her arms around Al's shoulders and nodded her head.

Al smiled, "Now, as for: 'What should WE do now?' Why don't we close these drapes and get to bed?

Like I said, I don't know what to expect in the poker tournament, but I DO expect to be with you!"

Marlene protested weakly, "But it's so early!"

Al smiled confidently, "Well, now that I'm home, I'm sure that you and I will think of plenty of things to do between now and the time to go to sleep!"

Marlene sighed, "Oh Al!"

The End.

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MichelleWhoIsMichelleWhoIsover 12 years ago
Thank you so much

I have to admit that in the beginning the story left me wondering when the raw sex would begin. But as I read more and more I marveled at how you could take the simple act of sex and turn it into a beautiful romance story.

You wrote a story of two people over coming get difficulties in their lives and finding happiness with each other. I especially found the realism when Henry revealed his tattoo. His question to Al about if he was finally home reminded me of so many that are still struggling today with that question.

I hope that you might find the time to write another story with the same realism and romance as I found in this one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Very sweet, a litte sexy and nothing to dislike

I must say, this is probably the first she-male story that is not balls to the wall porn that I will save and reread.

You have made a touching tale of two folks coming together, that gave me a warm and fuzzy that had nothing to do with my crotch, that just happened to have a sexy shemale and a touch of smut! Awesome!

Now, if your looking for another idea, lets see some more shemales and alot more dirty sex! Stories like this confuse my already broken wiring between my big brain and my little brain =P

icarr757@gmail.com

bobbieinnfnybobbieinnfnyover 12 years ago
One of a kind

Let me start by stating that this is the first time I have felt the need to comment on any story.

It started out a little confusing at first. I felt there was no real definition of characters. The story became clearer after Al observed Marlene through the skylight. One missing element early on was Al's confusion/ignorance as to his sexual orientation.

Now that I am done being a criticizer. I would like to praise you for your wonderful ability of writing a romantic story that happens to include sexual acts. The progression of the story was great. The underlying fear of Al and Marlene toward any type of overt display for each other was terrific. After finishing I had the distinct feeling a lot was left out because you may have felt the story would be too long, or that you would lose your readers interest. Although it would have made the story longer, by more development of characters and missing elements, I feel it would have made the story more compelling.

All and all I hope you continue to write stories along these lines as fine as this one.

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