I'll Take Care of You

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Eventually, she rose out of bed. I lay there, my mind and body both utterly exhausted.

"You look so tired. Sweet dreams, Shar."

As she turned to go, I felt a sudden irrational fear that she was leaving forever. I jumped up and grabbed her arm, hugging it to my chest.

"Wait, Nat. Don't leave...Don't leave yet. Can you..." My voice lowered gradually until it was practically a whisper. "Can you stay with me? For just a little longer?"

I felt like I was a little kid again, asking to sleep with her parents after a nightmare. She smiled at me indulgently.

"Okay. I'll keep you company."

"You're a mess," she added, shaking her head.

She didn't even bother to get undressed as she slid into bed. I snuggled against her, resting my head on her shoulder. She combed her fingers through my hair, straightening the tangles. Her other arm wrapped around me and held me close. I clung to her tightly.

"Nat, please don't leave, ever."

I didn't see how she could even breathe, much less leave, with my crushing hug, but I held on almost desperately.

"Shar. I'll always be here," she said, humoring me.

Feeling absurdly comforted by her silly promise, I lapsed into an unworried sleep.

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Author's Note: I apologize if this story strikes you as really bad. I've rewritten and reread it to the point where I can't edit it effectively anymore. But I liked the premise, so I didn't want to scrap it entirely. At the very least, I'll look back on it in a few months and hopefully see that my writing has improved :) If you have any comments, suggestions, or feedback please do let me know.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Absolutely sweet and delicious

See above

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

I enjoyed this story. Sometimes you just need a good release and having your best friend helping you achieve it makes it even better.

jenorma2012jenorma2012about 7 years ago
not bad

I thought this was pretty good, I like reading stories about messages, even though I have never really had one, but I have given some to my girlfriend, I though this story was not all bad

HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenabout 7 years ago
Extremely erotic!

Wow, this was a great story, just needs a chapter 2 to make it perfect! :D Thanks for sharing it with us.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
only thing missing

I agree with other commenter. The only thing this is missing is another chapter. Building up the romance for both of them thru passion, comfort, love, in-love... surprising Nat with her own 'settling down'... ultimately, if not monogamy, at least polyfidelity. Ya know, the kind of happy ending girls secretly long for, no matter how butch we let on.

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