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Steph stopped her frantic ministrations, alerted by a tone she didn't recognize in her friend's voice. Re-entering the bedroom, she looked at Gaby.
"About what?"
"I AM jealous – I don't want you fucking Mario! I want you to stay here, with me ."
Gaby looked down. She was frightened and didn't want Steph to see her vulnerability. Independent from a young age, she was not used to being so wrapped up in another person it was always she who was in charge, she who called the shots. But then this sweet, funny, clever, creative little beauty had come along and somehow managed to sneak past her defences.
Gaby was intelligent – she knew that apart from the reality of Steph having sex with a woman, her culture had a strong and powerful pull on her. She knew that the time wasn't right to push Steph into making a decision – things were still too uncertain – the girl was only starting to figure out who she was.
Unfortunately, while her rational mind told her that, her heart had capitulated the very first time she had made love to this sweet, naïve girl.
Gaby looked up. Steph's huge brown eyes were stricken and very frightened.
"But Gaby ...."
Now wasn't the time. Briskly, forcing her emotions deep down inside, Gaby scrambled out of bed, adopting an insouciant air and laughing (albeit somewhat forced), went to Steph and dropped a kiss on her long straight nose.
"Silly girl, I just mean that I would love to make love again – but I know you need to get home, so let's get you organized and to your car!"
Steph was insightful. She knew full well that Gaby was putting a good face on things but she was far from ready to deal with the conflicts which her increasingly complicated life was creating.
Several minutes later, smelling rich and pungent, her makeup smudged, her hair in disarray, she was ensconced in her car and on her way home.
"What am I going to do?"
Tears welled out of Steph's eyes. She felt overwhelmed and confused – she loved Gaby – and what Gaby did to her was unlike anything she had ever felt in her life – but she loved her husband also and despite his unwillingness to encompass her entire sexuality – his distaste for her ejaculating ways was obvious – she know he loved her and was a good husband.
"What am I going to DO?" she wailed to an uncaring car.
TO BE CONTINUED
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoI'm with germanchocolate4u. The tone changed markedly, too rapidly and I'd recommend a re-edit taking out that rape reference. It jarred. The strap on sex was urgent and almost angry. I struggle too with stories in the lesbian section that include graphic descriptions of hetero sex, esp describing cocks!
germanchocolate4uover 5 years agoWhat the hell happened here. Chapter 1 was very much an awakening and erotic story. Now I am almost repulsed by Chapter 2. It's over wrought with flamboyant adjectives and repetitive decriptions of the women's body. However, what incensed me most was the use of "rape" to describe the use of a dildo in a loving consensual sex act between two women. How dare that word be used in this instance, when in comparison, Steph's husband constantly brutalizes her vagina and denies her orgasms to prevent her from squirting, which he finds disgusting. I won't further berate their situation with his lack of cunnilingus. Secondly, how dare Steph tongues her female lover with the after taste of her husband's cum in her mouth. Like WTF, have the decency to rinse with water, mouthwash, or some kind of beverage and then pop a mint. If this was a paperback, Into the Fire it would go. Mayhem, if you plan to continue the series, I hope you are sensitive to the fact, this is the Lesbian Sex category. I'm no prude but the double standards and redundancies detracts from your work (in My opinion). This is an interesting story and I look forward to reading what you do next
Anonymousabout 12 years agogosh i first thought there was no 2nd chapter than i realized there was and started to read ... and oh god ... it's so good, but at the moment i am sitting here thinking... please, please continue the story.
I could stop after the first chapter but now ... i am absolutely looking forward to reading another installment.
keep up the good work! <3
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoI just read this chapter and I can't believe you hadn't wrote another one. Could you please take a little time to write another one.
Robert_Notover 13 years agoSeeing you've recently updated your profile, maybe there's hope after all that you will continue this wonderful story after four years. It was interesting reading both parts back-to-back as it appeared that your style became more fluid as you went on. The second part was tremendous, with a real cliffhanger of an ending.
I also felt that the use of the dildo, which I sometmes think is there to pander to men's tastes, was reallly justified in this story as a first indicator of Gaby's jealousy (clever trick!).
Keep on writing, where-ever you're publishing.
R.
