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I sat for a time in my car, taking one last look at her house. It was a long look. After awhile, the lights came on in room after room. Debbie, I figured, looking for me. I shook my head, already wondering if I'd made another bad choice.
I took a deep breath. I had to stop using her as a crutch. I pulled out the well-worn photos that she and I had taken in that amusement park booth so many years ago. I gave them one more kiss. "Bye, Debbie, have a nice life. Be a good mom."
I tore up the photos and tossed them out the window as I drove off in search of someone new, someone who would love me back.
It was time.
The End
Thanks for taking the time to read my story. I'll appreciate any feedback you think I deserve.
Edited by C. Lakewood
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 17 years agoIt was a masterful story of unrequited love and finally moving on. Anyone who's been in that position HAD to be moved. Well Done.
Anonymousover 18 years agothat was amazingly beautiful. I am very impressed by the way you write. There's romance in your soul, which sounds smarmy as hell but sometimes life is smarmy.
