Jack and the Rollercoaster Ch. 08

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Kezza67
Kezza67
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"Oh I think it would." Libby interrupted. "In fact I think I would rather like to watch. I could give scores, you know, six out of ten." The little tease was getting her own back.

"No. Libby." Retorted Ally. "It would be ten out of ten, I can vouch for that." I knew this would happen. My two ladies were ganging up on me already.

We cleared away the dishes, putting the uneaten food into a Pyrex dish. That could be micro waved later. Ally got serious as we sat in the lounge with coffee.

"I think this is the time, Jack. To tell you more about the modelling, especially as Libby's here." Libby was nodding her head in agreement. I groaned.

"Do we have to?"

"Yes, Darling. I think so."

To be continued...

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rightbankrightbankover 8 years ago
Dear Kezza67

you do like to slip in the zingers don't you.

Here I was, hoping for a heartwarming reunion with father and daughter and you take it to another level entirely.

well played.

bruce22bruce22over 15 years ago
Nice Sub plot

I imagine that certain people on the site would hold that he is a wimp if he doesn't cancel the wedding and kick the two of them out of house!

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