Jack Valentine's Love Hearts

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As I load my suitcase into the car there is nobody watching me as there was when I arrived, but my attention is elsewhere. I am looking forward, anticipating a future in which anything could happen. In this pleasant weather I'm wearing just a more flattering vest top beneath my red hooded coat and even then the overcoat is a little warm.

As I slam the boot of the car and walk back around to the driver's door I reach back into the pocket of my coat for my keys. My heart pumps faster as it closes around a familiar sugary disc. I pull it from my pocket as I slide myself behind the wheel of the car, a yellow piece of candy with a pink heart shape printed on it. Spelled out in pink letters I can clearly see two words:

'Eat me'.

THE END

Author's Note:

- Jack Valentine is a character in the folkloric traditions of Norfolk in the East of England. A kind of Valentines version of Santa Claus, he traditionally leaves presents and candy for children on their doorsteps on the eve of St. Valentine's Day.

- This story quotes from a number of existent texts, all out of copyright and in the public domain, and available in full online. These are 'The Piccolomini' by Friedrich Schiller, 'Goblin Market' by Christina Rossetti, 'Alice's Adventures in Wonderland' by Lewis Carroll, 'The Land of Heart's Desire' by William Butler Yeats, 'Tristram of Lyonesse' by Algernon Charles Swinburne, 'The Faerie Queene' by Edmund Spenser and 'Sonnet 18' and 'A Midsummer Night's Dream' by William Shakespeare.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Lovely!

This was a sweet story, I thank you for writing it. It makes me happy to see that not all sexual stories have to be crude, this was done with class and romance. I also must praise you on the allusions to past texts.

YDB95YDB95about 11 years ago
Beautiful!

One of the most tasteful and literate stories I've seen here...I enjoyed every word! Excellent job.

SweetOblivionSweetOblivionabout 11 years ago
Literate and intelligent

Well worth waiting for - great stuff - loved the excerpts from Goblin Market &c. Sweet O.

PrincessJezebelPrincessJezebelabout 11 years ago
Lovely!

Very much enjoyed the story, and the irony of using the verses from Shakespeare's MidSUMMER in the cold of February was charming. Nicely done.

Scotsman69Scotsman69about 11 years ago
A most lovely tale.

Fine writing, and a real story. Thank you.

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