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Click hereHe looked into Jill's eyes and realized what it was about her that turned him on so much.
Father and son continued to fuck Jill for another twenty minutes, and then, as if on queue, the two simultaneously filled her asshole and pussy with their semen.
Jill's orgasm may have been intense, but she had passed out from exhaustion only seconds prior.
Friendly handed Jill's driver's license to Dee. "Get her home while I clean this place up."
Dee quickly dressed and looked back at his father. "Let's not do this again with her, okay?"
"Why? You got a crush on her, boy?" Friendly asked as he holstered his pistol.
Dee lifted Jill's legs as he slipped her skirt on. "No, but I think I got a crush on her daughter."
I completely agree that there are enough "wife gone black, and never going back" cuckold stories out there. This is just the first third of the whole story. Has Jill turned into a slut? Not yet, even after all that she thinks has happened.
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Saying I ruined it... that doesn't leave me much to work with.
Chapter 5 ruined the rest of the story. Suspension of disbelief disappeared. It makes me sad.
That was your comment from the last chapter of this story. The situation has not improved Jill is a cheating slut for black cock and sadly always will be. It should be the end of her marriage but it sadly it wont be. I pity the cucked husband and the daughter.