Justine Ch. 06

Great character manipulation and storyline as the noose apparently tightens around our heroines. Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

To eugene???whatever

If the story is so bad why bother reading past the first paragraph? Funny, I was taught if a person had nothing nice or constructive to say then "shut up." You probable won't read this since it is so long ago but personally you are just rude.

To the author awesome story, yes some mistakes but who cares. I like the surprises, twists, and turns. I have read this entire story several times and still come back to it. Thank you and please keep writing

I can't stand it anymore... The only thing that kept me reading this story was not knowing what Justine was. Now, that that need is sated... The grammar is probably the last thing I paid attention to, because the story has so many holes it's not even funny. The protagonist is ridiculously overpowered, probably because you didn't bother to define for yourself what abilities she should have or constrain yourself to the minimum needed for her to survive. Everyone seems to know whatever they need to know, unless someone else doesn't want them to know. Natural talents and abilities play absolutely no role and apparently the characters use the author's mind to gather information they need as much as more conventional means such as questioning other characters. The beginning was promising at least...

I am glad that her mate is with her. I hope that they will be able to stay together.

You had a few typos but it was not to bad...LOL

so wrong for that! Can't wait for the next chapter!