Kinetic: The First Alliance Ch. 02 Pt. 01

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"Damn! I am hit," Jeramine called out.

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ResidentWeavilResidentWeavilover 11 years ago
Another short but interesting piece

I was excited to see a second page until I saw it was only one sentence long.

I am enjoying this tale. It has action and interesting characters. Not much erotica yet but you may be building to it.

I do wish you held off publishing until you had complete chapters. But since I do not know how the posting/editing process is being done, that may not be feasible for you. I would rather wait for bigger chunks than have the flow interrupted so often

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