Kristina

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She saw men looking at her arse as it wobbled in her tight fitting shorts she got in the car and sat there reflecting on what happened and how she meekly submitted to the two lesbian dykes knowing in her heart she was a submissive and she would always be sexually controlled by dominating people like them.

At least she had a job and a furnished apartment in Palm Beach Florida and a new life till her beloved Doug comes for her, she started the car and headed for the Highway.

To be continued

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kboneonekboneone9 months ago

It's Good, but the spelling isn't lol

OFF is the word for OF

and CROTCH is the word for Crutch

Other than that- the story is good

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

A subtle touch - which leads to curiosity - which leads to seduction.

This was assault which led to more assault.

Complete turn-off.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Interesting, but

...it is completely ruined by a total lack of sentence structure, the use of commas and periods. Which is odd, as the first two paragraphs were written very well otherwise.

After that though, the sentences are run-ons, and they either just stop short or blend with the following sentences, which makes it hard to follow the story. Much less keep a hard-on!

If a person is going to write a story, then know how to write!

And a minor thing, is that in the US we use the words 'ass' and 'elevator,' not 'arse' and 'lift.' And she's not a housewife, as she has no house with her husband. She is a new bride or just simply a wife.

I don't mean to be rude or insulting. I like the plot, but it needs a lot of editing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
omg

what I would give to be taken and used by women like that. I am in the process of giving myself an almighty orgasm

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